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(v1.2) Aqua Paradise Zone - Enhanced Edition
![]() Developer Last Online: Jan 2021
NOTICE ABOUT REUSABLE CONTENT:
You may reuse textures, sprites, and SOC for your own projects so long as credit is given. However, you may NOT reuse or repackage maps in any way, shape, or form; Don't disrespect my work like this :^(. So I submitted this map to OLDC not too long ago, and, hey, people liked it, so why not make an Enhanced Edition! ;V This edition of Aqua Paradise features Visual Enhancements! Tweaks to Level Design in response to feedback received from the OLDC! (not pictured, you'll just have to play it for yourself :>) A brand new Knuckles path! A totally unoriginal miniboss you've seen hundreds of times now! And more.... Goddammit MB, stop splitting my spoiler tags in two :^( Spoiler: Changelog since OLDC Spoiler: Changelog since OLDC Features a version with and without GameData. The GameData version allows you to collect the stage's 5 emblems! The non-GameData version can be used with other maps. It can even replace the OLDC version if the OLDC version is loaded first! (provided they don't share the same MapThingIDs as this one @_@(1055-1060)) Download Now
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#2 |
The unreliable judge
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That new Knuckles path is pretty good, I enjoyed playing this in the OLDC (even if I didn't get around to voting, oops) so it's nice to see it get some further improvements too.
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Okay, let's get started!
I started the game and... uh... where is Amy? This is actually a strange error. You used not only "Clear All, but also other "Clears ". I fixed this myself by setting Unlockable = 23 (because in the original game Amy is just under 23 unlockable). UPD: in fact I don't quite understand why this problem occurs. At my level, amy costs like 3 unlock and everything is normal After the release of 2.2.7, the game performance has improved. Now I can play normally! I have already played this level in OLDС as Fang. Let's play the Knuckles! What the--. okay, this is strange... I think it's illegal to do this. I think these platforms are moving too fast. Oh my God! How many rings are there? 128 rings in one place? It's too much! Tails... well, yes... Tails can't quite get through here. You can see the texture of the water on the floor. You can fix this by assigning the same texture as the floor. Or just let the water go even lower. Perhaps this is what you intended? In the spoiler, I want to talk about the emblems. If you haven't finished a level or are looking for emblems, don't read this! Spoiler: Okay. Boss arena. well, it's your choice to choose this boss, but it can be bypassed illegally. And complete the level Why should I show it? You can specify NextLevel = 1100 so that after passing the level, the main menu appears immediately I also found several errors. Spoiler: Okay, now let me tell you in general. I liked this level. He is good. I liked the water area, as well as the fact that for research - the player is rewarded. There are many secret shields and extra lives on the level. A good and balanced number of enemies at the level. I didn't like the number of rings. Too many of them. There are places where there are several boxes with rings. Even 5 pieces! I'm not talking about the entire level. At some points, the normal number of rings. I would like to insert here the moments that I liked, but. no. limit of 20 images. There are a lot of mistakes at this level, but it doesn't stop him from giving 7 out of 10. Nice work! I would like to see more works from you.
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Damn son, that's a lot of issues.
A lot I've missed too. Good catches! Quote:
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Regardless, thanks for the input, I have quite a bit of work ahead of me @_@
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I've got a few key criticisms here.
1. Too many rings There are WAAAAAY too many rings everywhere. It doesn't make much sense from a game design standpoint, and it personally looks very unprofessional. I wince imagining what would happen if a player had the emeralds here. 2. Way too open Something plagueing practically all levels designed by beginners. Most apparent in that "outdoor" area near the beginning; the player has way too much space. Even thokspamming as sonic, I still felt bored. How would, say, an Amy player experience this part? Oh, and it also makes the Banpyuras a non-issue. 3. Lack of enemies There's barely any badniks to speak of here, and the plaforming usually isn't challenging enough on its own to justify their nonexistence.
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[A person in a place]
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The size issue is not because he's a beginner mapper. No, it's a bit more unique than that.
You'll recognize it clearly once I point it out, but he's very much not new to mapping. ...All of his previous levels were for Kart, lol.
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#7 |
Mid-tier Pixel Artist
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U P D A T E
U P D A T E full changelog in post~ ---------- Post added at 01:50 AM ---------- Previous post was at 01:19 AM ---------- there was a bruh moment i fixed it please redownload if you can :^(
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#8 |
The Snoc
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But what was that bruh moment?
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#9 |
The dumbest man
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After defeating the boss, the walls did not fall back.
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#10 |
The Snoc
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OOOOHHH!
So that's why I couldn't complete the act!
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#11 |
Srb2 The Best Sonic Fangame
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um...why there is two changelog? ( oh nevermind i readed the post )
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Love love love the look of this stage, so much CD/Chaotix/Ristar vibes. It's just too short, I play it like 5 times over with the same character. Maybe I just want an Act 2 lol.
My least favorite part is that stretch where I have to spring bounce under water from platform to platform. End up just spindashing into the first spring and skipping all of it cause I just die waiting for bubbles otherwise. |
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This was one of my favorite stages in the OLDC, and since I'm procrastinating on making my own level, I was happy to give this revamp a try. lol
The improvements make a big difference. However, I was able to find a few errors: There's a missing texture near the beginning. See dark bar on the bottom left. If you rotate the camera around it, you can see through it. ![]() Here, when jumping from one platform to the next, the characters change color, as if they were under water. ![]() Also, if I may make a personal request, can you lower that Tails exclusive emblem at the start of the level a bit? I know where it is, but it's so hard to get to it. It makes me want to flip my desk. lol |
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I want to see a multi-act version of this zone.
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I'm trying to clean up all the stages that I didn't review for the last OLDC. I just gave this a run using the updated version.
(I'm still working on improving the sound quality for my videos, sorry.) https://youtu.be/FGkHNef4tVk |
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