For a first map, i must say that this is quite impressive. However, i felt like there could've been a tiny bit more of smaller changes, like the Act Clear theme, the Sub-Card of Act 1 saying "Find The Sign" as a nod to the original objective, the proper bumper-like fence function etc.
Still, i like what i see, and i look further into your next projects. Maybe re-countinue the remake of the map from Black Knight, perhaps?