this is actually pretty good for your first three act zone although, there are some thing like that one part with that broken(?) bridge where you have to take a red spring to get there, the problem for that part is that the bridge is too short for you to land on without taking the spring balls. Also another thing which doesnt really matter but kind of does is that the rings aren't using the float setting which make them float off the ground a bit. But still it IS your first three act zone so you'll improve in the future.