Act 1 Zone 1
Well, the first thing I see is that there is "no pit" effect.
Also, I don't understand why this liquid (or what this) does damage? It just... looks like regular water
Why are these crushers
so fast?
This fire comes out of nowhere. It looks strange. You can see how it works in RVZ
Act 2 Zone 1
I'm just falling out of nowhere. It looks strange, because in the 2nd zone of the 2nd act I fall from some kind of pipe (which looks more or less normal)
These chains and crusher are
too fast
And this moment is very difficult for non-spin characters. Didn't you put in a single air bubble?
Act 2 Zone 2
What this?
Well, what can I say in general. Let's go through the disadvantages first. There are a
lot of enemies on your levels. It's just not very pleasant for complete the level.
There are also very hard traps on your levels. They are too fast and difficult for the player to dodge.
Also on your levels the shadow is not very well done. Act 1 and 2 are too light and there are almost no shadows anywhere.
Bosses.
These are some of the hardest bosses I've met. I can't say or describe anything (I just don't like the concept of bosses in srb2) but it's too hard
On the plus side, I really liked the first level of the second act. This gravity game is interestingly made and it would be cool to look at a bigger level with this concept.
I also liked some of the moments in the second act, like this.
Don't despair! If this is one of your first experiences, it turned out very well.
Here are some tips I can give you:
- Try to make more decorations in your levels.
- Play with shadows!
- Less badniks.
- More ways (for example, for other characters).
