(Off topic) Idk if tempest or Inazuma are good examples, but Tempest probably isn't. If you want to make an OC, choose some new species, and make it look original. Or, include a "rarely seen" official character, I am working on a Bean the Dynamite wad, if you want to include that.
(On topic) Ok, so overall this was... horrible. Just horrible.
Ok, so I'll dump all the screenshots in spoilers so I don't waste space.
Ok, so could you make that zoom tube easier to see somehow? I failed to notice it at first.
Everyone keeps telling you to fix those goddamn skyboxes. I usually play in opengl, but my screenshot command only works in software (idk why)
I knew I was supposed to go forward - common sense - which some people don't have, so make it clearer please.
WTF???? So I'm guessing you don't know how to make a nice stream? You didn't even use the right texture for the environment it's in.
Ok, so could you fix that anoying texture bug please? "Presentation is everything"
Ok, so where the heck am I supposed to go? Is that... A HOMING CHAIN! *facepalm* No, just no, and where does it take you? It seems like the obvious path...
Wha...? It's not? Well, I got an emblem from my admin script using "mygravity" (which just changes your jumpfactor) and jumping up to a place you wouldn't be able to get to with vanilla characters.
Wha... what is this? Oh, it's that zoom tube I came from, but why did you place it in such a place, it seems that you have to jump and speedthok into it?
So... I can't get to the end sign? Wait a second... I am where I started! Wow, amazing level design *Sarcasm alert*
Is this level unfinished???
I'm not gonna say anything... Just that you should change that texture, and never use it for anything AGAIN! EVER!
Until I have shown you this is how I got here. =3
What the... Does this even have any kind of purpose?
Wait, what? So I went round in circles for 2 minutes just to find that I had missed THIS BUTTON??????? I just looked round that corner, and thought "oh, just some kind of decoration for once!"
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay..... Or maybe not...
Oooohhh, how amazing! It's totally not an eyesore!
Please, add some decoration.
Ooh, a nice beach with some wallpaper with a sky texture on it!
how fancy!
Wait... so you DO know how to make water sectors? I'm really confused right now...
How many people have told you to fix this skybox? How many times?
Well, I also have to say, that every single boss level has "CHEAP DEATH" plastered all over it.
Overall, I honestly hate this level. And don't say I'm being harsh, because I am one of those few people who actually
like Eggmanway5
And this is coming from the embarassed creator of "Sonic Core" from "Sage act 1"
Anyway, I should really tell you how to improve. Basically, please remove homing chains, and make places reachable with any character.
Also, I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just giving my opinion. Do not take any offence, just
improve with what I have had to say. Thanks
~~HitCoder~~
Yay, long review over. *sigh of relief*
(Even though it wasn't that long compared to some, and people may call this a rant.)
Anyway, good map pack examples to try (if you haven't already) are The Emerald Isles, TorturedPlanet, and MysticRealm. All three are very popular and very liked among the comunity.