I presume this would be harder to make into an animation than Death Cheese 1. I loved it though, and while the concept of Sonic characters dating in a fanfiction almost scared me off at first, it was executed rather well. There were moments that reminded me of classic comedic situations I've seen in sitcoms or movies... and the Robo-Chao's voice seems to be begging for Memetic Mutation.
I'd have to say my favorite parts would probably be
[spoiler:add8eec36e]No I did not rent "A walk to remember"... Whaaaaaaat?! SHE DIES?! I WAS READING THE NOVEL! WHEN I TAKE OVER THE WORLD I'M GOING TO TAKE A STORY OFF YOUR HOUSE... what? Then you'll have to live in the basement... oh? Then you'll have to live on the street! what?! WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU HAVE NO STREET?!![/spoiler:add8eec36e]
[spoiler:add8eec36e]"ohhh I remember, haha that was fun... Me and Knuckles holding you back, you biting Knuckles' arm off to get free."[/spoiler:add8eec36e]
[spoiler:add8eec36e]Knux: I told him not to stare directly into her eyes or she'll get scared off
Sonic: Uhh but it doesn't work that way, she's not some kind of deer
Knux: Sure it does, it worked on Rouge, remember?
Sonic: That's because you stared at her for 20 minutes, I think she was legitimately creeped out![/spoiler:add8eec36e]
[spoiler:add8eec36e]*Knuckles with mock accent* "ohh uhh, so sorry, I have these spasms that make me throw water into little girls' faces... *splash* oh there I did it again!"[/spoiler:add8eec36e]
I also liked how Cream giggled when Tails came to pick her up, I would not have expected a little detail like that in there. I do have to ask though, based on the context of the ending:
[spoiler:add8eec36e]Did Cheese die?[/spoiler:add8eec36e]
PS: Aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww! *curtsies and skips away*