ShinyShinx.wad

[Tails24]

Well first im going to convert the front hurt pose to the shading pose, and then that will come next

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

yea you did some nice shading in the middle one =D

 

[Tails24]

update with new shading and side pose

Something looks weird about the side frame...

EDIT: just realized I didn't finish the hurt pose *fixes, but not in image*

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

looks good..

the side frame: - the legs are a little down compared to the arms, i think
- the front paw its not right, you shouldnt be able to see the fingers, just look at your hand from the side, you dont see the fingers, you just see two, the other 3 are behind to pointing finger.

 

[Tails24]

Yeah I realized that, and also fixed the eye on him

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

another detail: his ear, it looks like a front view

 

[Tails24]

Thats what it is!

Does that look better?

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

yep, looks great now :D

EDIT: Just a question, is that a flower in his... well you know where xD
i'm not a fan of pokemons so i dont know lol

 

[Tails24]

now its the last two poses for standing... which i am going to do tomarow because im tired XD

Okay, I was thinking for his ability to be thok or double jump (i think double jump) and make his spindash a melee attack instead (lots of electricity!)

EDIT: Worked on the idle pose

which one is better, the top or the bottom?

 

[kiro the hedgehog]

double jump suits better than thok
why dont you make it with shooting, he could "shoot" electricity, like thunders

i also had an idea for the spin: when you press the spin button, he would charge the energy and when you realise the button he will hit the nearest enemy with some electric atack, it would look great.

well its just some ideas, im going to sleep now. good luck on the wad
if you need help, you can always msg me :D

EDIT:
idle pose: i like the down pose better :)

god, you work so fast lol

 

[Tails24]

Thanks =) and at the same time I have a beta spindash-ish pose (not sure if i will keep it, because I don't know how im going to animate it good) I dont know how to change the item you shoot or how to soc some way into shooting one after charging, so I think i will keep it the melee attack ;)

 

[Ice]

Thats what it is!

Does that look better?

I think his nose should come off his face a bit.

 

[XutaWoo]

You should get rid of the top/bottom pixel of the 3-pixel corners of the eye. It makes the eye look blocky with those pixels on the edge.

 

[Monster Iestyn]

I think you should move Shinx's head more forward on the side frame.

 

[Sniperific]

Also fix the tail on the side frame as well

 

[Tails24]

Also fix the tail on the side frame as well

oo Gotcha ;)

I think you should move Shinx's head more forward on the side frame

Hmm I think I know what you mean, I think ill try it

You should get rid of the top/bottom pixel of the 3-pixel corners of the eye. It makes the eye look blocky with those pixels on the edge.

*fixes in paint* Yeah, he looks way better now! =)

I think his nose should come off his face a bit.

I moved it 1 pixl forward, because when it is off the outline he looks kind weird =/
EDIT:

that picture has everything added/taken away from all the suggestions (except for Monster Iestyn's idea) You guys can tell me what tail looks better ;)

EDIT2: Oh yeah, and I am going to create a regular Shinx as well, but once 1.1 comes out. Our version right now doesnt have a good blue for Shinx =\

 

[Sniperific]

Monster Iestyn ment make his head further forward from his body, apart from that he looks quite good

 

[Tails24]

Yeah I fixed it (in paint XD)

EDIT:

That good?

 

[Chrispy]

The side lack the little fuzz on the side of his face..

 

[Tails24]

Oh yeah! Thanks Nitro! *tries to edit in paint* It isnt comming out good... *tries again*
EDIT: Ok I think it came out right