Official Level Design Contest: November/December

[BlueZero4]

You say that's single player?

 

[xxBeanGirl420xx]

Looks kind of bland...

 

[I'll Begin]

Yeah it's crap. I posted it for the critisism.

 

[glaber]

You can proably expect to see either Glaber Base 5 or 6 in the next contest.

 

[BlueZero4]

I'll Begin, something to consider is giving the player a reason to go underthe trees, or in the nooks and crannies. A good one I can think of would be making the area visually interesting, so they want too look at whats inside. You can also put likea ring box or something rewarding, but I don't think the player will come back for that more than twice or so.