• Do not use Works in Progress as a way of avoiding the releases system! Works in Progress can be used for sharing early betas and for getting suggestions for improvement. Releases of finished content are not allowed in this forum! If you would like to submit a finished addon, click here for instructions on how to do so.

iron turret (updated 5/13/09)

Status
Not open for further replies.
I won't download without screens. Since Photobucket is blocked for you why don't you try Tinypic or Imageshack?
 
I highly suggest that you should change the name, because there is a level by that name in SRB2 already.

Adventure mode isn't really needed for this level. Adventure mode annoys a lot of people, since analog can be strange as well as homing. I also don't think that button in the beginning is needed. I was confused where to find it since the pillar blocked it. The arrow didn't help me figure that there was a button to find.

I thought it was strange that you had some of the green slime hurt you and some of them didn't. I would change the not hurting water to be regular looking water. That crushing ceiling with the spikes seems to come out of nowhere, so I really suggest removing that, or make it easier to know it is coming. I didn't get farther then that, but that is The level really needs rings.
 
Here, I'll give some images:

Here is an area loaded with green slime, and the top comes in crashing on you. I barely made it due to SA mode being on. Please, turn it off. And be sure you can beat your own level before you release it.

A zoom tube. Not bad, but really, very much not needed at kinda random.

I didn't get past this room. Here, the ceiling comes down incredibly fast, and I don't have enough time to get through this area. I might if SA mode was not active.

All in all, you made a smart move trying not to go for the contest. This isn't very good. So work on this. And please, add rings! I did not see a single one!
 
you play it in CB. SRB2CB. I made it so that when you play it in cb, it will play in single player but have thing from sonic adventure mode.
 
verifiaman said:
theyre ALL blocked. Anyone heard of school days?
Are you referring to a certain X rated web comic? If so, I know of it. So how long does your home ban last?
 
no. im not talking about that one. Im talking about that nice little h-game which i thought was an ANIME!! oh and to next december
 
I did play in SRB2CB, though it was a SVN version of it. I don't think that would have made a difference. I think it is highly unwise to make a level just for a exe unless you are absolutely sure that is needed. I didn't see anything that would really need it through the parts that I played. I suggest you fix those annoying issues, especially the spike ceiling thing and taking off adventure mode.
 
Very much so. I'd like to add I did what you asked. I got to a check point. And Torgo, you'll get a kick out of this: There were RINGS! But now I see Adventure mode is necessary because he has a chain of homing-lightdash-homing-lightdash-homing-ect. which is annoying, and I just gave up there. Yup. Flat gave up. Please, if you want to do this, just make it like, auto homing+ Lightdash. Not adventure mode so people have to download another thing they might not want.
 
There wasn't any rings to the point where I quit. It definitely needs more rings in the beginning.

I got through more of the level, and found more stuff that was annoying. There is a part of the level that you can't see that there is a deathpit until you fall. The level in general is filled with more cheap death gimmicks then mystic realm. That is not a compliment. I had to use noclip and god to get through that homing part. I found it really annoying that you had that yellow barrier to instantly kill you.

In short, this level has way too many cheep gimmicks for its own good. Some of the architecture isn't too bad, but the cheep gimmicks ruin it.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Who is viewing this thread (Total: 1, Members: 0, Guests: 1)

Back
Top