zcruins (first map)

[ZCCloudStrife]

Hey ppl this is my first map. Rate and Criticism please http://www.sendspace.com/file/djffzo
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[Eblo]

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[Chaos]

Up now.

 

[MajinD]

This level has some problems:
No level header.
It's very cramped.
Enemies aren't placed out through the level, most of them are in the middle.
Eggman is in the level, if it's a boss level, that's ok. but this is an act, not a boss level.
You have a small level, yet a huge thok barrier. make the thok barrier smaller.
The rings aren't deafed
Here's the tutorials i'd recommend reading:
http://www.srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Header
http://www.srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Designing_101
And if you use Doombuilder or SRB2 doombuilder:
http://www.srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/SRB2_Doombuilder_Tutorial

i'd give this a 2/10 because:
1: It has a thok barrier.
2: you actually managed to make teleport lindefs that work 100% in your first wad, which means you've at least read something in the wiki.
So, read the parts that i linked, learn from you're mistakes and try again.