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Oh my....

I'm sorry but in my honest opinion this sucks. Not trying to flame, but look


toonzimrotate.png

zimturn.png

...Please compare the two. Please.

Now...

1: barely any shading. I'd call 3 colors shading, but not two (unless executed properly as SSN showed). ESPECIALLY if that shading is just cut by a plain vertical line.

2: Solid geometric shapes = BAD. Unless they're not strictly on body parts, or the body parts are SUPOSE to be solidly geometric, I dun think that you should make the head a cube, nor should his suit be a triangle. :/

3: the frames are WAY too different from each other. Try making them look similar, like the same character at different angles and ONLY different ANGLES.

4: lol whar's his backpack?

Anyway.... Needs improvement. I'll stop there.
 
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