tLoT (Need editors)

[Guitarplaya]

Well, I'm writing a book, the Legend of Tierra(tLoT), and want criticism/editors. It's a fantasy story about two Spirits who are tiwns and turn against each other. So far I've only finished one chapter.

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Text version:
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Microsoft Works Word Processor version (formatted):
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[Chrispy]

It sounds like the tLOZ with the gemini twins.

 

[Guitarplaya]

It sounds like the tLOZ with the gemini twins.

Wut?

EDIT: Oh right, Legend of Zelda. And BTW, has anyone downloaded this yet?

 

[Cyan Ryan]

Why the **** don't the <a> tags work correctly on my pages? Do I need to enable something?

EDIT: Never mind, I just turned on HTML. :P

 

[Guitarplaya]

Oh no! My beautiful topic is dying!

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