Spring Mountain Zone Act 1

[Silver Sonic]

What do you think of it?

Download: http://srpgp.supersanctuary.com/ffh/download.php?file=6a3a528848444952deb46fec8143305c
My first Level!
What´s the problem with the endsign?

 

[BlazingPhoenix]

Looks too dark, make the brightness 192 or higher, but not too high.

 

[FuriousFox]

It's too short, too dark, has too many death pits, has weird death pit flats (Why grass? Why not PIT?), has rings that don't float, and is too cramped. Also, there's no exit sector, so you can't end the level. I'd suggest testing your levels before releasing them.

EDIT: There also seems to be no thok-barrier. I take it you haven't read the level making tutorials yet, have you?

 

[Silver Sonic]

What´s the name of the black floor?

I will:
make thockbarrier
and light the level up

 

[Princess Plushima]

What´s the name of the black floor?

The black floor is PIT.

 

[Callum]

Gah, there are even unclosed sectors!

I will fix it up in a moment.

 

[Callum]

Fixed up. Changes:

There is now a Thok Barrier
Set the brightness to 195
Set ALL the ceiling flats to F_SKY1
Fixed the Death Pit flats to PIT
Removed 1 Death Pit, for it was causing problems
Fixed unclosed sector problems
Gave the rings the "Deaf" flag.

Here it is!:
http://srpgp.supersanctuary.com/ffh/download.php?file=49956192f9c0c8fd6f77e984da3beaee

 

[Silver Sonic]

Thank you! *downloads*
Edit: I´ll make my next map like this

 

[Callum]

No problem. Just avoid unclosed sectors. Come back if you have any problems.