lfelipe51
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My first version of a Super Smash Bros. This wad contains Congo Jungle, Saffron City, Planet Zebes, Hyrule Castle and Dream Land.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6rlhcd (441KB)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6rlhcd (441KB)
all of them are small, and as for congo jungle, it looks nothing like congo jungle at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!DDMMCC said:Ok, I best start reviewing...
Dream Land
-It's small. Try making it a bit bigger.
-It needs powerups.
Saffron City
-There's a texture problem on the right FOF (Part of the bottom has a different texture).
Planet Zebez
-Powerups are too easy to get.
-Lava rises a bit too fast.
Hyrule castle
-It needs powerups.
Congo Jungle
-It's too small.
-It needs powerups.
-It needs more detail, it's very bland.
Turret way (You didn't mention this level)
-You die when you spawn. Fix that ASAP.
General problems
-Change the music (I noticed you put the same music on all your levels that have been released). That music doesn't suite many levels, and it gets annoying, especially when it's in all the levels. Try to use different ones for each level.
Apart from that, It was quite fun to play. Keep practising, and you'll get much better.
6/10
305coolguy said:all of them are small, and as for congo jungle, it looks nothing like congo jungle at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why are you commenting your own wad file?And what is mod doing in the levels section?lfelipe51 said:305coolguy said:all of them are small, and as for congo jungle, it looks nothing like congo jungle at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, This isn't bad for a first version. '-'
I smell competition.Chisuun said:What impeccable timing. This comes out right when I make MY SBB64 pack.