RustyMountain

[Morph]

YAY! I finally got Doom Builder work! With the little help of the toutorial of this side I created a little, easy, but very nice level, I think. Rusty Mountain is my first level so feel free to critisize me, but remember that I don't know that much about wadding.


Before you ask:
- YES, Thock-Barrier is active!
- YES, there is no segment violation error!
- YES, this is no map consisting of only three tiny rooms or something like that!
- YES, Easy-mode differs from Normal-mode and Normal-mode from Hard-mode...

- AND YES, I have some screenies. Here they are:

RustyMountain Frontside...

A pool with deadly acid!

After I killed nearly every enemy I could make this screeny of the lake on the top of the mountain.

Inside the lake. The only place on RustyMountain were healthy plants are able to live

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So finally I have to mention that this map was created for Sonic. You might play it with Tails or Knuckles, too, but that would be no challenge. So give it a try, explore this map and find its secrets. But first you have to...
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[JJames19119]

At least it covers the basics. That's good enough.

The idea of going around a small mountain is interesting to say the least. A few of the textures seem a bit off and you had terrible choice for a music setting here. The turret was unnecessary and putting many pop-up turrets in the same place was also unnecessary. I like the idea of using the lake to go UP. You did a good job making this look like a total wasteland, capturing that 'this place is dead' feel. Putting rain with a cloudy sky might improve that feeling even more. The place also needs to be bigger as it's quite cramped, the walkways on the sides of the mountain were far too small. The level itself is very small too, it doesn't take much to get through it. Otherwise, I'd say you have a reasonable mapping talent. Just be sure to improve and I'm sure you'll do quite fine.

 

[[deleted user]]

This looks awsome *downloads with lots of joy*
I'll tell you what I think when i've played it
EDIT: I just played it and heres what i think.

On the Plus Side:
1. Lots of replay value
2. Good/Funny music
3. Well... it just looks cool!
4. Would also be great as a match stage!

On the Down Side:
1. Its a very short level
2. Not many enemys

I'd give it a 7.5/10 great job

 

[Morph]

The place also needs to be bigger as it's quite cramped, the walkways on the sides of the mountain were far too small.

Well... I tested it and I can easily run up the mountain with sonic. I think they are fine.

you had terrible choice for a music setting here

I like this music a lot, but maybe it's annoying when you've heard it too often before.

Putting rain with a cloudy sky might improve that feeling even more.

Quite a good idea. I'll check this out.

Just be sure to improve and I'm sure you'll do quite fine.

Thanks. :)

1. Lots of replay value
2. Good/Funny music
3. Well... it just looks cool!
4. Would also be great as a match stage!

Thanks. :)
Do you really think this would be a good match stage? Hm... I had to add few things than.