Ray for 2.0 (100% scratch)

[H Y P E R]

I am currently working on a 100% scratch version of Ray
for the new version of srb2.

Compliments, comments and criticism please.

 

[Thrust]

Lookin good, looks to be in srb2 style to me, dunno if his skin is supposed to be that dark though, and there's a weird blue hue around the shoes and gloves?

 

[H Y P E R]

Lookin good, looks to be in srb2 style to me, dunno if his skin is supposed to be that dark though, and there's a weird blue hue around the shoes and gloves?

True, but I thought the darker brown looked better,
as it is a good contrast for the pale gold color.
Some wads that I have seen have had some blue
shading on the white parts, and it looked okay,
so I decided to do the same for my wad.
I'll start work on the second sprite in a little while..

 

[Yellow thing]

it looks.....dark. too dark. make it a bit lighter if possible

 

[Fawfulfan]

I think Ray would look better if his outline was a lighter color.

 

[clairebun]

The outlines for the entire body seem fine to me; it's the gray outline for the eyes and shoe stripes that looks strange. Try making it lighter.

His skin seems a bit brownish as opposed to a tan in your sprite; I'm not sure if that's accurate or not, as it's been a while since I last saw a reference pic of Ray.

 

[Thrust]

His skin seems a bit brownish as opposed to a tan in your sprite; I'm not sure if that's accurate or not, as it's been a while since I last saw a reference pic of Ray.

Didn't you know? Ray is black.

 

[TDSunshine]

Didn't you know? Ray is black.

Sorry, i'm bad at detecting sarcasm.

 

[ViluVector]

I might be starting a Ray.wad for 2.0 soon.
Here is the front sprite:

I'll post more sprites here as I make them, but I'm kinda worried
about how long it will take, as it took about 2.5 hours
to draw just this one. Compliments, comments and criticism please.

Wow Is Great! Much better than my crappy one! xP
But is a bit Dark!

 

[H Y P E R]

Minor update:

I got this one done in about 45 mins :)
I must say, the tail looks MUCH better than
it did in my old 1.09.4 Ray.
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7391/74827068.png

 

[ViluVector]

Wow Great Job!
But I think that the shoes has to be more red...
Its too dark!

 

[H Y P E R]

Yay, update.
I got the side sprite done and added some shine to others:

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/3738/18280347.png
There's something wrong with the face on it, but I
can't quite put my finger on what.

 

[MotorRoach]

Hear what people say and make his color lighter, please :<

 

[H Y P E R]

Hear what people say and make his color lighter, please :<

Fur-wise or skin-wise?

 

[Jammin]

Hmm i just have one thing it just makes me flinch ab-it.. ok maybe two.

Pic:

See where i circled the shoes that should be flattened a bit. Also since i know your trying to make him look like the original ray (or maybe not) where i circled i do believe that ray had a circular head no bumps so round it out a bit :3. Thats all.

 

[ViluVector]

Yay, update.
I got the side sprite done and added some shine to others:

There's something wrong with the face on it, but I
can't quite put my finger on what.

Well, I think that his colors look better here.

 

[Chaos Knux]

Fur-wise or skin-wise?

Both, they both look like he just got out of a tar pit.

<-Reference

 

[Blacklightning]

Uhhh... dude, I think he's modelling off the SegaSonic Arcade Ray, not the comic book one.

Fur colour's fine, but methinks you might wanna try using a brighter skin colour. Both references aren't nearly that dark to my recollection.

 

[H Y P E R]

If it makes you guys happy, I've paled the skin a bit, how's this?

Also added the back-diagonal sprite. :3
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/6783/94370040.png

 

[Chaos Knux]

MUCH better, now instead of being black, Ray fell asleep in a tanning bed.