Ollie the duck character wad (Ollie.wad)

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Good start, But you should work on it some more.

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It's good that you made the sprites from scratch, but... *shiver* It doesn't look much like a duck. May I suggest a little more shading and edge rounding?
 
Also, you should make a larger, better life icon. Don't use the whole death pose, just use the head.
 
Another good idea is to not put any music in the character wad making the file much bigger than it needs to be. The spring jump glitches when the ceiling and floor are close to each other. I think it should have flight since it is a duck after all.
 
This makes me want to make a bean the dynamite wad. Maybe I will when I'm done with newnitro.
 
It's no wonder he reminded me of bean then. I don't really remember my first character. It was pobably nitro though.
 
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