Blah blah criticism blah blah gay blah blah expletive blah blah emo whining blah blah this keeps going blah blah.
Did I miss anything?
Really, your map is complete and utter crap. Everyone's first map is complete and utter crap. You should EXPECT your first map will be complete and utter crap. This is NORMAL.
Whining when everyone tells you this obvious fact is NOT normal, however. I don't care what the people on some forum somewhere that's totally unrelated to this tell you, here we have rules and a way we do things. If you don't like that, you can go ahead and leave. Every idiot that leaves makes room for someone else with an open mind to criticism. There are plenty of tools on this forum and the website to help level designers improve. You can either use them or not use them.
However, being an emo kid is a quick trip to the banned list, because we simply have no tolerance for incessant whining. Be mature or leave. You have been warned.
Lock.