My New Hobby

[Spirit Dragon]

I decided to do an adventure sprite comic. Here is page 1.

 

[TDSunshine]

Do not want.

 

[akirahedgehog]

You're really good at pasting sprites!

 

[sonicfreak94]

You're.

This looks decent, though. It's nothing absolutely amazing, but it doesn't suck.

 

[Spirit Dragon]

Do yall think I should continue with the comic?

 

[speedy fox]

i think so. but dont continue with the whole "shadow died" theme. make your own theme.

 

[sonicfreak94]

... The idea of the comic is to continue the story of what happened in the time frame of Sonic Adventure 2, obviously. So why would he change themes now?

Anyway though, I'd like to see how this works out. I say go for it.

 

[speedy fox]

True. Go for it. The comic might actually have a chance.

 

[Spirit Dragon]

 

[Luminous]

Ugh, a freaking sprite comic.

This comic is just sprites and backgrounds pasted again and again with a generic and boring story. As of right now, the characters are pretty unappealing and plain.

Also, why is the background of Rouge's home so hideous?

 

[a bee]

Rouge is a big hardcore anime fan, can't you tell?

 

[Spirit Dragon]

I am a hardcore anime fan.

 

[Chaos Knux]

Not bad, great idea for a storyline. Sprite burn my eyes a bit, but if you are using sprites, you probably can't draw any less eye-burn-y. I support your efforts.

You're.

...was used correctly in the post above yours, why point it out?

 

[Torgo]

Last edited by akirahedgehog; 6 Hours Ago at 10:52 AM. (CST time)
That is why he said that, it wasn't corrected.

Like I said on the other topic, I think you should just take this to a place where sprite comics are actually appreciated. There you can get proper criticism and such.

 

[clairebun]

Magnify some of the panels by 100%. This way you get a closer look at the action and cut out all of the unnecessary space.

 

[Sonnarkku]

Hadn´t Shadow´s android already been created?

Oh well, it´s not good, but it is also not that bad. Guess I woudn´t care to see some more pages.

 

[Project Dark Fox]

If you take the comic down to the MFS forums you may get a heck of a lot more critique on it.
I otherwise have no comment.

 

[Wombatwarlord777]

When I read the part about Tails missing Shadow, I laughed by head off. And it's really, really hard to get me to laugh.

Anyway, this looks worlds better than those videos you made. You might be onto something. By the way, who's this Speedy Fox character?

 

[Spirit Dragon]

Look Speedy fox up in the search button. Btw
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[Yugi2]

I immediately lost any and all respect for this upon seeing Dark Sonic. This comic is just getting retarded now. Dark Super Sonic is dumb enough, but Super forms out of nowhere? Knuckles dying for no reason by virtue of ONE atrack? Are you kidding?