My first wad, Zokura the mutant.

[Glenchlax]

I use print screen,then paste it into paint,then cut the image out,then save as PNG.

 

[Prime 2.0]

be sure to change the picture mode to index as well.

 

[chaos_sonic]

Oh ok. But I can't print right now.
Super zokura mutant

 

[Glenchlax]

You don't have to print anything...... -.-"

 

[chaos_sonic]

I know I'm just getting the model down for the super form. Do you still want his super form like this?

 

[Blitzzo]

The tail is too tube-like. It should be thin near the beginning, then get wide until it gets to the middle (approx.), then shrink down again near the end.

 

[Hyper_Sonic00]

I agree with Foxblitzz but other than that your super form is great.

 

[chaos_sonic]

The tail is too tube-like. It should be thin near the beginning, then get wide until it gets to the middle (approx.), then shrink down again near the end.

Like this?

 

[Hyper_Sonic00]

To me thats perfect but I'm no critic so..

 

[chaos_sonic]

Well tails are furry, so they're not always going to be in perfect condition.

EDIT: Hey don't tails look thinner when there against the ground.

 

[Hyper_Sonic00]

Very true, but still, im no critic

 

[chaos_sonic]

Well here is the next set of sprites.

 

[Hyper_Sonic00]

TEACH ME TO WAD!!!Just kidding. I'll figure out how to get good on my own.

 

[Glenchlax]

These are looking pretty good!

 

[chaos_sonic]

Thanks, I try to do better at the shading but as you know, it's a complex thing.

 

[Freeze]

I hope I don't sound too rude when I say this, but;

Your character is basicly a recolor of Sonic with a tail. There's nothing really new here. I can see what you're trying to do by adding your character into the game and having fun but in the end whenever you decide to revamp your character into something more original you're going to hate all the work you put into this. :/

I don't want to sound rude at all, infact I was going down this path and it led me to regretting all the work I put into making a character sprites only to have them destroyed when I thought of something better.

I'm just trying to help you into not putting too much effort into something that you will probably not like in the future.

 

[chaos_sonic]

This is my first wad, it does not mean I'm putting a lot of effort. Why would I need to put effort into a simple recolor, all I have to do is add the tail and fill in the colors. :? The easiest step to making wads would be a simple recolor first weather people like it or not. If they just skip and spited their own characters then that is their buisness. :|

 

[Freeze]

Well if it isn't effort for you to make those sprites and use it in-game when you might remake your character, knock yourself out. :D

 

[chaos_sonic]

New sprites

As you can see, the first sprite is zokura dashing.

 

[Glenchlax]

Looking good! :P