My first level

[Crash1000]

Well this is my very first level that i have made,The Green hillside.

Hear are Some screenshots
http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?image=srb200043be.png
http://img214.imageshack.us/my.php?image=srb200052kt.png

And here's the level
[EDIT] ADDED A THOK BARRIER.

http://srpgp.supersanctuary.com/ffh/download.php?file=c39178c2f3b7a17b92a50d6b0d5329be

 

[Dark Mystic]

The level was really short...and the emerald was really easy to find...

other than that...I liked it.

 

[Callum]

It looks nice, however you are missing a few things.

-No thok Barrier. VERY important that you include one of these.
-The rings aren't deafed.
-The token would have to be floating a little if you want to get it.

It is also VERY short as Dark Mystic stated.

 

[Sun]

Wow, this is actually pretty good for someones "first" map. I do like the way of getting the token.

 

[Crash1000]

It looks nice, however you are missing a few things.

-No thok Barrier. VERY important that you include one of these.

I wanted to add a thok barrier but when i added it the levels textures got screwed up and i decided not to put a thok barrier

 

[Callum]

I wanted to add a thok barrier but when i added it the levels textures got screwed up and i decided not to put a thok barrier

Bad choice. Without a thok barrier means that Sonic can thok through the walls into the Hall of Mirrors oblivion. Just go into 3D mode and set the textures back, assuming you are using Doom Builder.

 

[Silver Sonic]

This is a good level! :D But don´t use so many different wall textures GHZ and GFZ don´t look too good in one level!

 

[Crash1000]

yeah im using doombuilder but is it posible to move around while im in 3d mode.

 

[Callum]

yeah im using doombuilder but is it posible to move around while im in 3d mode.

E = up
S = left
D = down
F = right

 

[Hyperknux]

Level was ok but I speed thoked at a wall and i went flying out of the stage

 

[Crash1000]

Thanks GCfreak :)

 

[Callum]

No problem :) Glad to help out the new ones.

 

[Crash1000]

Now there is a thok barrier.

 

[Eryn]

Also, the textures don't get messed up. The walls of the thok barrier, which have no textures, replace the puter walls. Here's a time-saving tip - Don't texture your outer walls until there's a thok barrier there; otherwise you're wasting time.