My first level -.-

[Matthew]

Well this if from doombuilder tutorial but its the finished product and its pretty good. If anyone wants to become a level maker this can show you the finished product. It took me not to long.

http://srpgp.supersanctuary.com/ffh/download.php?file=dd052716d4aca6bdf56d0ce758d5eef3

 

[Naga]

Pretty good seeing as its your first map.
Try making it a bit bigger, it was a bit to cramped, and replace the yellow spring with a blue one, I almost got hit on more than one occasion when I was sent flying upwards.

OMG, A thok barrier! Try making it a bit lower, try making the thok barrier have a floor and ceiling height of 500, so you can see the sky.

 

[Eidolon]

NO. Don't use integers like 500. Instead, use 512. It's a worthy reccomendation to use multiples of 8.

 

[Matthew]

Here's the update version

http://srpgp.supersanctuary.com/ffh/download.php?file=a98cc230bb9291655fff6139f62cd369