My first Level Wad

[Shinu The Hedgehog]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/1bvb7k

Edit:Fixed =D

 

[on Edge]

Extremely cramped, and lack of thok barrier. <.<

 

[BlueZero4]

Google sendspace.

 

[Shinu The Hedgehog]

There i fixed the wad so here's the link, also, i'm a noob at making levels XD.BE WARNED:This level is extreamly short and cramped because i did this in 2 days non stop

http://www.sendspace.com/file/1bvb7k

 

[Jazz]

Read and understand...

 

[zck2020]

i'm a noob at making levels XD

<.< You sure you want to say that. Oh yeah, and, level looks cool. I'll try it out later.

EDIT: Pretty cool. A ton-o-textures in random places though, but, I can't say that I can do better. Good work.

 

[Sonic Shadow]

There i fixed the wad so here's the link, also, i'm a newbie at making levels XD.BE WARNED:This level is extreamly short and cramped because i did this in 2 days non stop

http://www.sendspace.com/file/1bvb7k

Fixed.

 

[Jazz]

EDIT: Quite horrid. A ton-o-textures in random places, but, I can't say that I can do better. You need to read and understand Level Design 101.

Fixed.

 

[zck2020]

Grrrrrr!

*Frowns* I liked it Jazz. I didn't say it was horrid. Quote editor! Its not that bad. >:P

 

[Vash]

You call levels with cramped areas good? I don't. Cramped areas kill the flow, especially when you are playing as Sonic.

 

[Jazz]

Re: Grrrrrr!

*Frowns* I liked it Jazz. I didn't say it was horrid. Quote editor! Its not that bad. >:P

I guess you need to read Level Design 101 too.

Cramped levels fail in general. Just take a look at any standard SRB2 level and compare it to this level. I would hope you notice an enormous difference...

 

[Shinu The Hedgehog]

Fine i'll make the level a lot wider

 

[on Edge]

*coughunderstatementcough*

 

[zck2020]

Did I say that it was great? Or that it flowed? No. All I said that it looks cool. That it's decent for a first level he ever made. I have a right to my opinion! >:P

 

[Hannyness]

Yeah, peoples, loosen up, its his first WAD :) im' not much better. and you can quote me on this: EVEN MYSTIC WAS A NEWBIE ONCE. OK, stop quoting now. :)

 

[supersonic45]

Yes, but he needs this critism to get better.

 

[Kaysakado]

Yeah, peoples, loosen up, its his first WAD :) im' not much better. and you can quote me on this: EVEN MYSTIC WAS A NEWBIE ONCE. OK, stop quoting now. :)

Yeah, but Mystic actually had the sense not to release his first WAD. I think. Anyways, even if it is his first WAD, we shouldn't loosen up, we should be more strict to tell him what his mistakes were. AKA, post above me this win.

 

[.hack]

Yeah, peoples, loosen up, its his first WAD :) im' not much better. and you can quote me on this: EVEN MYSTIC WAS A NEWBIE ONCE. OK, stop quoting now. :)

Ok, I think I will.

"It's my first wad" is not an excuse for a bad level (Neither is "it's a beta," I might add as a sidenote.) No matter how goodor bad the level is, if they post it here, then criticize it like any other WAD. If they don't like what we say, then tough tonails.

 

[Jazz]

http://ssntails.sepwich.com/mb/viewtopic.php?t=7749

This was my first wad. Nobody has any excuse to say "omg itz meh fhirsh wad!"

As you can see from the screenshots (the download link is broken, no I won't reupload it, you can get it from the current version of my mod) that level doesn't suck.

 

[zck2020]

Yes, but he needs this critism to get better.

Yes, I do agree that constuctive criticism is necessary, but, not when people go overboard with bad criticism. It's like beating a dead horse. And, not everybody is great at everything. But I do agree that constructive criticism is needed on anything.