mt_Castle Battle Zone

[Super Tails]

I made this level the past days and it´s finished now.It´s my first level wad and I hope it´s quite good. Pics:
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/459/88466684pj7.png
From the top of the big tower

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/9379/68725502gg9.png
The big tower

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7556/11124192df1.png
Inside the castle

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/5899/76514929zk3.png
Outside the castle

Downloadlink: (new)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/imm8lf

 

[Jazz]

Not bad at all, just a few minor things.

Some of your rings aren't deafed (floating) you need to make sure that all of your rings have the Float checkbox checked (in SRB2DOOMBuilder) or the Deaf checkbox checked (in other editors)

Also, with your FOFs over the entrance to your towers, neither the block or the textures line up. I think you just need to raise the floor and ceiling of your control sectors by 32 or so. I didn't check your map in any editor, so I'm estimating the amount. Look into that the next time you edit this.

The only other thing I ask is that you do a little more with the inside of the castle and the inside of the towers. I'm sure you can add a bit more detail to 'em.

Otherwise, this is quite good for a first map. Make more!

 

[Kalaron]

Hmm...very simple, first map? Good.

 

[Super Tails]

Thanks for the positive reactions.B.t.w. I edited the map,check first post.

Some of your rings aren't deafed (floating) you need to make sure that all of your rings have the Float checkbox checked

Fixed

Also, with your FOFs over the entrance to your towers, neither the block or the textures line up. I think you just need to raise the floor and ceiling of your control sectors by 32 or so.

I think I fixed this too

The only other thing I ask is that you do a little more with the inside of the castle and the inside of the towers. I'm sure you can add a bit more detail to 'em.

Made this too

 

[on Edge]

The map looks kinda small, bland, and pointless. Jive the players some cover to hide/run behind and some things to do.