Leaf forest WAD

[Azure Hawk]

This is my first WAD

It is a match level and it is quite small but it contains various features. Give it a go and see what you think

I give this map 6/10


Leaf forest.zip
~KA12~

 

[Princess Plushima]

Well, you made the mistake new users always make. You underestimated the importance of the Thok Barrier. Every level has one, every level needs one, every level that dosen't have one needs counceling. Also, don't go crazy with the textures. You need to pick a theme and stick with it. We don't often see metal in a forest, unless it's Metal Forest Zone or something. You also need to remember weapon rings for match levels. And several of those platforms need sector borders.

Sorry if this seems critical, but I'm trying to help you improve.

 

[Azure Hawk]

I know it is rubbish. I am going to work on a new one called emerald island zone. It has all those things

 

[Callum]

Well, I think Draykon pretty much summed it up. However, he forgot these things to mention:

Non-deafed rings.

NUKAGE1 does NOT suit a sky.

No Thok Barrier. I can't stress the importance of this.

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Let me fix it up.

 

[Azure Hawk]

PLZ do and Post the newer version. I will post it in the topic

Thank you GCFREAK