Kirby - SRB2ME Edition

[Scizor300]

Well, seeing as none of the other Kirby WADs are being converted to SRB2ME, I decided to make my own Kirby WAD for SRB2ME.

Critisism is welcome, but don't be an ass.

 

[H Y P E R]

Ok, I have a little bit of criticism here.
1. The shape of the eyes is wrong, they are
meant to be a bit taller and skinnier
2. The shading is a bit 2d, make it look more 3d
3. There is meant to be a white shine on the eyes
4. It is too big
Other than these, it's good.

 

[Connor]

It's size is probably larger than it should be, but other than that, It's just little to sharp on some parts, but other than that, it's....pretty good. keep workin' on it!

 

[mr noob 77]

meh its alright

 

[sims]

Why does he have huge, bug eyes? And I think the shoes need a bit more shading, but it's good otherwise.

 

[Scizor300]

Shading, Eyes, and little things have been improved.

 

[Ice]

Shading is really minuscule, shade more than those little areas and make it more noticeable.

 

[Fyrus]

Why does he have huge, bug eyes?

Have you seen the real Kirby? His eyes are huge too.

 

[clairebun]

For the eyes, use the darkest shades of gray you got. Darken the outline of the shoes a bit as well.

 

[Connor]

Shoe tips need to be a bit more curved, and as the others have said, those small areas where shading is required need attention

 

[Jacy]

Shading, Eyes, and little things have been improved.

That is actually quite good for a second attempt.(Better than I could do.)

 

[Jellybones]

The sprite is too big, but other then that it seems fine.

 

[sims]

The eyes need to be a slightly farther apart from each other, they're too close if you compare them to an official picture.

 

[Chrispy]

lol pillow shading

 

[Chimera]

lol pillow shading

Doesn't seem that much like pillow shading, actually. :P

Seems PRETTY good, but I suggest making his smile a little smaller, put blue under his eye shine (like in the official pic- he has blue eyes), and I think it'd be better if he had dark pink feet instead of red.

 

[Jellybones]

Don't make him smile in every sprite, he isn't like that. Just a tip.

Also, his ability? Make it double jump, but make it multiability. You could probably make him jump as high as knuckles to even it out or something.

 

[on Edge]

Don't be so reserved with the shading. Go get some tutorials or reference pics of spheres.

 

[BrennenTehAwsumz]

I don't mean to be rude or anything. But if you want you may use these as a reference or you may even use these.

I don't ask for anything but for my name to be mentioned on the release post, but I don't care if you decide not to. I just hope your wad is succesful. Happy wadding.

 

[ZarroTsu]

1) The face appears off-center, and I can only assume this is the front frame.

2) Shading is way way way too minimal. It looks like a pancake with feet.

 

[Fyrus]

Those honestly look a bit worse.