Japanese Temple

[supersonicdude211]

I'm working on a Japanese Temple on the SRB2 Doom Builder. Just some for flats and textures, and I'm done.

Here are some screenshots:

[img=http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6786/srb20010hf2.th.png]

[img=http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9017/srb20011hs3.th.png]

[img=http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9177/srb20012lk0.th.png]

[img=http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9936/srb20013ep1.th.png]

That's it.

 

[on Edge]

http://www.srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Designing_101

 

[Sumakima]

Arrg, my eyes! It looks really narrow and cramped. Is it an "All Emeralds" level (meaning it has all the emeralds in it?) There are also some out of place textures that makes it look even worse.

 

[supersonicdude211]

Sorry, and it's not a emerald start level.

 

[Chaos]

Where the hell does the Japanese Temple part come in?

 

[supersonicdude211]

It's bad because it's the Second level WAD I Started working on. And its also the "SECOND" WAD I "RELEASED."

 

[Morph]

To be honest those screenshots don't look anything like a temple or something. All you can see there are very thin paths with very high ceiling. Scenery is nonexistent (except for the possibility you call giving linedeffs and floors some textures so). Judging from the screenshots this map might also have been called "Random Cave Zone".
I can't even say anything more but that it looks very random because inside these screenshots there is really nothing to talk about...

It's bad because it's the Second level WAD I Started working on. And its also the "SECOND" WAD I "RELEASED."

If you are thinking this is bad by yourself why did you show anything or even are planing to release it anyway?

http://www.srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Designing_101

*point, point, point*
I have to join the comment of my previous speaker here.