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how can i improve this level? i will make new music later

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please give feedback on what i should change in this level, it is not finished. the next level will be underground for a while until you go back to the surface
 

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i played it and i have some problems, i see that you are a beginner wich is fine! but i recomend the following

1. i recommend a little less enemy spam
2. i recommend having a longer level
3. i recommend making the level a bit more spacious, it feels claustorphobic
4. i recommend not mixing the dull lifeless colors that techno hill zones assets have, together with the many more colorfull and vibrant colors and stage assets of green flower
5. i recommend hiding the special stage token a little better instead of on the path where the player is supposed to go

and finally

6. i recommend making the directions a little clearer, you dont need a arrow pointing towards where the player needs to go but try to add subtle directors to let the player know where to go without it sticking out like a sore thumb

these were all the issues i had playing the level really, just add music next maybe :dramahog:
 
ok, on it! making new stuff for the level
i did start to make a bit of stuff for the act 2 but im not done yet
changed the layout of the level a bit, and got rid of the techno hill zone blocks (they were placeholders until i find what sprites i like)
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its still not finished tho, i plan to make it longer
here, a gif tho
the tall grass and no decorations are wip, they will be changed later
 

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