House

[speedy]

Thise is a model of the out side of my house
it is a match leval/tag

http://www.sendspace.com/file/9t8xxg

 

[dominicapopo]

Uh a better description would be grate. Is it a match map? Please elaborate.

 

[Jazz]

Read and Understand...

Too cramped.
Rings aren't deafed.
Missing textures abound.
'Nuff said.

 

[Hannyness]

Okay. I tested this map, and this is my honest opinion.
[Good Points
+this map has no missing textures.
+this map has a working thok barrier.
Bad Points
-This map is rather small (Like I can talk, :] )
-This map is not easily manoueverable
-This map's rings are too close together - it took me just 55 seconds to collect all the rings in this stage and see the lot.
-This idea is not all too original tbh.
Okay. Overall, I would rate this map very lowly. This is what needs doing.
Improvements
=extend this map.
=use a little bit more of an open space to run around and shoot people in. Can you imagine playing a vaguely competent Tag match here?
I hope I haven't missed anything! Overall, I'd say read this link: http://srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Design#The_Basics:_Level_Making_101 and keep practising! I hope i've helped you a little.

EDIT: looks like Jazz beat me to it :] Always does. Our links are slightly different though for some reason :S And I couldn't see any missing textures!

 

[Jazz]

+this map has no missing textures.

Uhh yeah, missing textures on the edges of all sidewalks.

Overall, I'd say read http://srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Design#The_Basics:_Level_Making_101]Level Design 101[/url]

Read and Understand...

Already linked him to the wiki. I would also suggest that you check your BBCode before you submit a post, something got screwed up in yours.

 

[SRB2 Guy]

Okay. I tested this map, and this is my honest opinion.

Good Points
+This map has a working thok barrier.

Bad Points
-This map is rather small like my level.

-This map is not easily manoueverable.
-This map's rings are too close together - it took me just 55 seconds to collect all the rings in this stage and see the lot.
-This idea is not all too original.


Okay. Overall, I would rate this map very lowly. This is what needs doing.

Improvements
=Extend this map.
=Use a little bit more of an open space to run around and shoot people in. Can you imagine playing a vaguely competent Tag match here?

I hope I haven't missed anything! Overall, I'd say read Level Design 101 and keep practising! I hope i've helped you a little.

Fixed.

-SRB2 Guy

 

[Hannyness]

Yeah, my BBcode is messed up And. agreed, i'm a hypocrite, but i've extended mine now. :]