heres my first map

[sonicfan123]

http://www.sendspace.com/file/d9g8wd
heres my first map

heres a screenshot
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/3557/srb20001hd0.png

 

[Chaos]

You don't need the url thing.

 

[sonicfan123]

thanks

 

[Bloodylightning]

This level is good make more.

 

[Spazzo]

Well, this just show's that everybody starts someplace...
You're missing a few key features in this map. First and foremost, why the 20 or so eggmans? 1 is more than enough in most cases, 2 in special exceptions. Another thing you are missing is a thok barrier. You can continuously thok into a wall as sonic, and go right through it. Your map also has a lack of a header, which would explain why the map has all of GFZ2's data.

Did you make this map with WadAuthor or Doom Builder?
http://clipper.ship.edu/~af0916/srb2/dbtutorial/tutorial.html - Doombuilder Tutorial
http://clipper.ship.edu/~af0916/srb2/level/index.html - WadAuthor Tutorial

Try going through these tutorials first, and then give wadding another shot. Overall, it's a good start to mapmaking, excluding some errors.

 

[Super mystic sonic]

Spazzo gave perfect hints without flaming. I got nothing to add, except that you might want to make a bit more use of hills and such. Just make a sector with a differen't height, Don't forget to give it a lower texture, otherwise it'll give mirror effects!

 

[BlueZero4]

And the map header:
http://www.srb2wiki.sepwich.com/index.php?title=Map_header

 

[sonicfan123]

thanks for the tips