Green Paradise Zone

Green Paradise Zone 1.0

Dr Pants

The Gun Bun
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Green Paradise Zone - Singleplayer Map

After much time spent experimenting with Zone Builder and following Seventh Sentinel's helpful tutorial playlist, I've finally made the first level that I'm happy with uploading!

Green Paradise Zone features multiple paths, secret areas and more. My personal best time for this level is 0:37 Seconds. Relatively short, but I've tried to go for a quality over quantity approach here. Constructive feedback is very welcome!

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Well, let's get started!

The first thing I see is that the wall is too close to the player's camera.

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These stupid unnamed fish jump too high.

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Always make the control sector of the water lower, otherwise you will have a water texture on the floor.

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It looks rough enough. Slopes love flatness.

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Well what can I say. This is a solid first level in which you can gain experience and that's good. The level looks at some points large and empty, which is not very nice.

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I also want you to pay attention to this moment. The player may think they need to run straight when they really need to go right. Always make sure the player knows where to go.

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I hope you will make more levels and will not make mistakes. Good luck!
 
Well, let's get started!

The first thing I see is that the wall is too close to the player's camera.

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These stupid unnamed fish jump too high.

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Always make the control sector of the water lower, otherwise you will have a water texture on the floor.

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It looks rough enough. Slopes love flatness.

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Well what can I say. This is a solid first level in which you can gain experience and that's good. The level looks at some points large and empty, which is not very nice.

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I also want you to pay attention to this moment. The player may think they need to run straight when they really need to go right. Always make sure the player knows where to go.

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I hope you will make more levels and will not make mistakes. Good luck!
Thank you very much! I'll see about patching it up.
 

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