Flower Valley Zone (filename mismatch)

[Guitarplaya]

OK, this is my latest and most scenic 1p level.

Screens:
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=11760_srb20169.png
View of final path
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=11759_srb20168.png
A bit earlier than that
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=11758_srb20167.png
Waterfall in the second area
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=11757_srb20166.png
View of starting area


DL Link:
http://www.2shared.com/file/3024156/7a74daca/LushousLake.html

It also features a MASSIVE monitor bounce secret.

Have fun, and post constructive criticism.

 

[Chromatian]

Reveiw time!

1. It is way too cramped, I could barely move as Sonic.
2.How in the world does the music fit in with this level?
3Exit sector was just a little too plain for me.

Resize it and it may get better.

 

[Eblo]

This level was an EPIC PHAIL. It was REALLY cramped, bad music choice, too short, and just plain awkward.

 

[Chaos]

I thought EVERYTHING was major phail!111. Just say, "It's not good." or "Try again, but change something". Fail lost its taste and your posting of it just makes it spread.