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Emarald Realm WAD
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verifiaman
The master of verification.
Yeah this is probably gonna be locked without some proof.
Sniperific
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Well we cant judge a level by just a screen shot, any chance we could download the wad?
From those screenshots, I can tell you've at least got some experience in level-making. Those parts of the levels I see in them do not look cramped at all.
However, I do notice some undeafed rings in the boss level in the 3rd screen.
However, I do notice some undeafed rings in the boss level in the 3rd screen.
Sniperific
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blue-fox said:
http://srb2ffh.supersanctuary.net/index.php
Make sure when it gives you a download link to copy link location then paste it here, also the reason im saying upload it is so people can explorer all the level and tell you about any bugs and where to improve your level further.
Don't post the post you say has it until you've completed uploading the WAD, and have the link ready to post.
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Daredevil
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The Beginning Zone 1, 1/10
Okay, scrap this, and do it all over again.
The Good:
- FOF knowledge
- Pit knowledge
The Bad:
- No Thok Barrier
- No Rings
- No Enemies, apart from some Jetty-syns at the start
- Random textures
- Cramped
- Short
The Beginning Zone 2, 2/10
The Good:
- 2D Mode knowledge
- Enemies
- A ring!!!!!!!!111111 omg
The Bad:
- No Thok Barrier
- Repetitive
- Textures and gimmicks completely different from Act 1
- Crawla swarms
- Jetty-syns in Zone 1
- No Exit Sign
The Beginning Zone 3, 0/10
The Good:
- Boss works
The Bad:
- No Thok Barrier
- No Egg Capsule
- Slime is not a water block
- Slime doesn't fit
- Textures and gimmicks completely different from Acts 1 and 2
Overall, 1/10
Redo your levels. Take time on them, and compare them to the official leels, and stuff like the Mystic Realm. Make sure they have a difficulty curve, too. I guess that all I can do is direct you to Level Design 101, which is here:
http://wiki.srb2.org/wiki/Level_Design
Okay, scrap this, and do it all over again.
The Good:
- FOF knowledge
- Pit knowledge
The Bad:
- No Thok Barrier
- No Rings
- No Enemies, apart from some Jetty-syns at the start
- Random textures
- Cramped
- Short
The Beginning Zone 2, 2/10
The Good:
- 2D Mode knowledge
- Enemies
- A ring!!!!!!!!111111 omg
The Bad:
- No Thok Barrier
- Repetitive
- Textures and gimmicks completely different from Act 1
- Crawla swarms
- Jetty-syns in Zone 1
- No Exit Sign
The Beginning Zone 3, 0/10
The Good:
- Boss works
The Bad:
- No Thok Barrier
- No Egg Capsule
- Slime is not a water block
- Slime doesn't fit
- Textures and gimmicks completely different from Acts 1 and 2
Overall, 1/10
Redo your levels. Take time on them, and compare them to the official leels, and stuff like the Mystic Realm. Make sure they have a difficulty curve, too. I guess that all I can do is direct you to Level Design 101, which is here:
http://wiki.srb2.org/wiki/Level_Design
Sniperific
Member
Bosses don't need a Egg Capsule and i don't even know how to create one of those yet.... in other words i don't think you should rate it down because it doesn't include an Egg Capsule.Daredevil said:
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Cacee gaming
Please tel me your kidding ;_; The only reason he knows how to use 2d mode and FOF's is because I told him, "The Beginning" Is his first level he made....even then he kept going, "how do you blah blah blah?"Monster Iestyn said:
And how was I supposed to know that? o_0
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