Eggguard Palace Zone 1 (EggguardPalace.wad)

[Guitarplaya]

Ok, this is my latest level, featuring plenty of FOFs in the sky. It's a Temple-Grass themed level, alot like Aerial Garden Zone in the actual game.

DL Link: http://www.2shared.com/file/3049156/75ef7b7/EggguardPalace.html

Screenies:

http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12256_srb20195.png
Start area
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12257_srb20196.png
Second part with an inside area
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12258_srb20197.png
Third part including four platforms
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12259_srb20198.png
Overview of the last area from the checkpoint
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12260_srb20199.png
Then you fall a long way into this flat area with holes in it (redone)
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12261_srb20200.png
Looking at the sixth part (redone)
http://www.imagehuge.com/out.php?i=12262_srb20201.png
The final seventh part that resembles the first

Criticism would be appreciated.

P.S. There is supposed to be three g's in Eggguard. It's a compund word.
P.S.S. Don't try to cheat. There are Linedefs to stop you. Except for on top of the inside part.

 

[Daywalker]

The level is kinda bland some parts can be longer and I would say make some parts like a palace to make the level longer.

 

[Ice]

The level is really good. I would suggest to use more detail though, and shorten some of the bland parts...

 

[fickleheart]

Wait, AGZ is in regular SRB2? I thought it was in Mystic Realm.

 

[nadjili]

The level is really good. I would suggest to use more detail though, and shorten some of the bland parts...

Ya it's very good. Just do that.

 

[Luminous]

Wait, AGZ is in regular SRB2? I thought it was in Mystic Realm.

It is. I think he's thinking of the match level.

 

[Guitarplaya]

Wait, AGZ is in regular SRB2? I thought it was in Mystic Realm.

It is. I think he's thinking of the match level.

I sure am.

 

[BlueZero4]

I thought some of the ideas near the spawn were cool. The level sucked, though, because after the halfway point you wimped out and left your level to die a bland and lonely death.

On the subject of gameplay, I'd just like to note that trying to keep Knuckles and Tails from was a bad idea. Keep in mind that Tails and Knuckles have assets that Sonic doesn't, so you're limiting Tails and Knuckles as characters. If you really wanted to keep Tails and Knuckles from breaking the level, perhaps you should've designed the level so that it wasn't possible to sequence break, even without an invisible wall.

 

[Guitarplaya]

The level sucked, though, because after the halfway point you wimped out and left your level to die a bland and lonely death.

You call that bland?!?! I'll show you bland!

(stupidact2imadeinlike30minutes)

http://www.2shared.com/file/3044944/c322ebf/EggguardPalace.html

 

[I'll Begin]

The level sucked, though, because after the halfway point you wimped out and left your level to die a bland and lonely death.

You call that bland?!?! I'll show you bland!

(stupidact2imadeinlike30minutes)

http://www.2shared.com/file/3044944/c322ebf/EggguardPalace.html

That's not how you take critisism/advice.

 

[Guitarplaya]

The level sucked, though, because after the halfway point you wimped out and left your level to die a bland and lonely death.

You call that bland?!?! I'll show you bland!

(stupidact2imadeinlike30minutes)

http://www.2shared.com/file/3044944/c322ebf/EggguardPalace.html

That's not how you take critisism/advice.

It was a joke.

EDIT: Updating first post to include a better finish to the first act. Act 2 will be getting a major makeover.

 

[Sasa]

Wow, this is great from first image! Good work!