DemoBox

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DemoBox - Where's the box came with the demo...?

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THE DEMOBOX
A demo of a level pack that's supposed to come package with the box...

Comes with 3 Race Levels, 2 Prison Stages and a bit of extra... Only reached by the Champions
Featuring...

Ripple Metrocity Zone
A stage taking place on a vivid green Metrocity in its downpour.
(3 Laps)

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Sunset Archipelago Zone

Just by the...​

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Nice tracks! I had a couple of bits of feedback I wanted to offer.

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I feel like this turn could use some directional indication pointing right; an Ark Arrow would do the trick.

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Not the best screenshot, but the arrow that's getting covered up by the time is a bit misleading in my opinion; it feels a bit like you should be going to where the tripwire is rather than make the sharp left you're supposed to. I would pull those barricades forward and maybe make them a different color so they stand out more, make it clearer that that's shortcut territory.

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I feel as though getting stuck or knocked into this corner can be a bit punishing; some springs to the left of the existing ones would help this part of the track out for me. It might also be worth bumping the springs up to red strength.

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The foliage combined with the hump of this hill makes it hard to see the tripwire & booster ahead; additionally, the Outrun booster kind of blends in with the tripwire a bit, so I feel like its placement straight forward from this hump ultimately feels a bit awkward. I think it'd be good to adjust this section a bit - even adding a bit more directional signage could be a big help.

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My only note for Sakura Serenity is this turn. When you turn into this area, it can be a little unclear that you NEED to head up the slope to progress, and my natural inclination is to cut the corner. I think adding some offroad, or even just a different texture, to more clearly direct the player to hit the dash pads and the ramp, would help this little corner.

Great tracks though! These shaped up really nicely overall.
 
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