Bowling Alley - Special Edition -ITS BAD

[Donovan the hedgehog]

EDIT5: DO NOT VOTE UNTILL FINAL VERSION!!!
EDIT4 = Noo! I posted it in editing and not levels! , WEll I COULD Need a beta

EDIT3 = Nodifyed The user and waiting for reply

EDIT2: Compeating Agenst http://ssntails.sepwich.com/mb/viewtopic.php?t=12163&highlight=bowling

EDIT: Beta 1



ALL RIGHTS RESERVED Waiting for user to reply


used for MAINCFG: SOCedit

Used for map: SRB2 DOOM BUILDER



I liked the Bowling Alley Beta that was in the editing and now I want you to compare witch one is the best.

Information =

MAP11




Spoilers =

An't tellin



New Feautures =

1. Teleporters

2. Different textures

3. Night Time

4. Behind The Bars

5. If andvanced, teleported to boss

6. If bad, teleported to teleport level


Screenshots:

Downloads:
Sendspace

Super Sanctuary

MegaUploader



Credits

All by Donovan The Hedgehog




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[Goober]

Re: Bowling Alley - Special Edition

It's good that you put this in editing becuase it can still use a LOT of work.

SA mode and teleporters everywhere do not equal a good level, my friend. You seemed to have random bonus boxes placed periodically throughout the level, such as a life box in the middle of a blinky-blue room. Work on your the level design as a whole, and the item/teleporter/SA mode problems might fix themselves:

http://wiki.srb2.org/wiki/Level_Design

Please under stand that the above link is NOT, I repeat NOT, intended to be an insult- you've shown as that you are a competent level creator, now prove to us that your a competent level designer.

 

[Donovan the hedgehog]

Re: Bowling Alley - Special Edition

It's good that you put this in editing becuase it can still use a LOT of work.

SA mode and teleporters everywhere do not equal a good level, my friend. You seemed to have random bonus boxes placed periodically throughout the level, such as a life box in the middle of a blinky-blue room. Work on your the level design as a whole, and the item/teleporter/SA mode problems might fix themselves:

http://wiki.srb2.org/wiki/Level_Design

Please under stand that the above link is NOT, I repeat NOT, intended to be an insult- you've shown as that you are a competent level creator, now prove to us that your a competent level designer.[/quote]


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THX

 

[SSNTails]

What about... SONIC BOWLING?

 

[Luminous]

Is this for race?

 

[Superusuario]

Uhh...

Invalid download link.

Anyways...Im going to see it and test it.
Edit:Ok...time to rate!!

1. Enemies in the central teleport.This room containms alot of jetty-syn-gunners that will auto-hit you when you enter and an Eggman.There are 80 RINGS IN THE ROOM!!Enough to be Super.
2. Not enough enemies in the another room.Castle Eggman Zone 2 has alot/Necesary enemies so...it keeps where it is...instead,This level ruins the ''dificult curve''Because it's too easy.
3. Object Placement is horrible.We can see in Level Desing 101 in the Wiki that Things like 1-ups/Armadeggon shields must be placed in hard-to-reach places,And at one of the ends what do i see?A 1-up.And...
4. SA-Mode.The SA mode sucks...Can you read the Level Desing 101 Please??

I'm gonna rate this...lemme see...This deserves a 0/10.It's the worst level that i have ever seen.(Excluding my wads...)

 

[Luminous]

Only your Sendspace link works.

 

[Goober]

I'm gonna rate this...lemme see...This deserves a 0/10.It's the worst level that i have ever seen.(Excluding my wads...)

Whao, dude, was that really necessary? You gave the guy 4 good tips, then blatantly flamed him. WTC?

 

[xxBeanGirl420xx]

I'm gonna rate this...lemme see...This deserves a 0/10.It's the worst level that i have ever seen.(Excluding my wads...)

Whao, dude, was that really necessary? You gave the guy 4 good tips, then blatantly flamed him. WTC?

That's not a flame, it's a rating based on his criticism. In his opinion it's the worst level that he's ever seen. He's entitled to his opinion. How is this a flame? Did he direct anything inflammatory at the author? No? Then it's not a flame.

 

[Goober]

This deserves a 0/10.It's the worst level that i have ever seen.(Excluding my wads...)

Oh, er, opinion... not flame. Duely noted. My bad, Ash.

EDIT:

"This WAD is awful. Here's why: List" - Constructive. This clearly explains what is wrong with the WAD and even how it could be fixed.

Ok I see. My mistake.

 

[xxBeanGirl420xx]

It's constructive criticism as well; he gave a list. The quality of the list MAY vary, but it's still constructive nonetheless.

 

[Goober]

Yeah, I know now. Sorry.

 

[SRB2 Guy]

EDIT5: DO NOT VOTE UNTILL FINAL VERSION!!!

Seems like an excuse to stop the bad ratings.

Anyways, i'm going to download this (ew) and rate it.

Edit: Oh... my. In this case, I can simpily not provide critisim, because this is one of those levels that I just can't figure out where to start. All I can say right now is look at a few good levels (Nuclear Sunset Zone for example).

 

[light dasher]

What about... SONIC BOWLING?

Thats in MT_Spazzatack if I remember correct =/ ever played it, wait you don't netgame *shot*

 

[Chengi]

Only your Sendspace link works.

Pretty soon, no link will work...

 

[Triple 7]

Actually...

If you remove url from the end of the address the downloads will work.
SRB2FFH
MegaUpload

 

[Luminous]

Bowling Alley - Special Edition -ITS BAD

That why release it?

 

[Monster Iestyn]

Dark Fox, he changed the title because everyone else saying it was bad.

And why is this topic still alive, even if the WAD itself is bad?