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Bean The Dynamite (Duck) WAD

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Since there is no Bean WAD, I decided to create my OWN Bean WAD...
Current sprites...:
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Give some criticism!
 
Did you base of the normal Bean? Try to take a look at this:

bean_the_dynamite_by_songokukai-d4h0dbr.png


Really, it looks good... On concept. And just to ask something? What is that in the middle of Bean's eyes? A nose? Can a duck have a nose Sonic-like? No! He is a duck! So, try to make the nose look like it has some depth. How does the legs blend from green into yellow? Look at this:
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Do you notice what I mean? your sprite looks like it suddenly changes from green to yellow. I know this is your first sprite, just giving some tips.
 
Did you base of the normal Bean? Try to take a look at this:

bean_the_dynamite_by_songokukai-d4h0dbr.png


Really, it looks good... On concept. And just to ask something? What is that in the middle of Bean's eyes? A nose? Can a duck have a nose Sonic-like? No! He is a duck! So, try to make the nose look like it has some depth. How does the legs blend from green into yellow? Look at this:
eebc445adf.png


Do you notice what I mean? your sprite looks like it suddenly changes from green to yellow. I know this is your first sprite, just giving some tips.

Thanks for spotting the mistakes! I fix them later.
 
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