Bark, The Polar Bear (Work In Progress)

[Scizor300]

-Eyes taken out to be redone
-Hair Added
-Diagonal-Front body added
-Side Frame has been started on
-Shading improved a bit

 

[Scizor300]

Side Finished

 

[Wombatwarlord777]

"Finished" my fanny. Where's the head at?

 

[Inazuma]

Side Finished

Wow! That looks nice. If only the other sprites had a head though. =O

 

[Torgo]

Personally, I like this version better. The hair is more defined and the shading is a little better. Though if you would base your sprites off of this then you should make the stomach overlap the legs. I made a little edit to this sprite to try to fix those issues, but I don't think it didn't turn out the way I wanted to.

I could try to toy around with it more, but I already spent too much time on something that isn't even my project.

 

[Scizor300]

Being honest, the eyes don't look very intimidating, and the hair doesn't look anywhere close to the official OR unofficial art, it looks more like a spitcurl.

And Torgo, the legs on your sprite look way too thin.

 

[Senku Niola]

*idles*

 

[Kaysakado]

Those legs don't like they could support him, Senku.

 

[Senku Niola]

That's Bark's original design, his legs are supposed to be short and thin.
http://concept-mobius.technoguild.com/content/view/84/44/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tUyGnN4Vq7I

 

[Jellybones]

I don't like the face on Senku's sprite. Or the shading, it just looks odd here. I like what Torgo posted much more.

 

[Senku Niola]

Mine has actualy depth, Torgo's and Sciz's lacks... pretty much everything.

 

[Kaysakado]

That's Bark's original design, his legs are supposed to be short and thin.
http://concept-mobius.technoguild.com/content/view/84/44/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tUyGnN4Vq7I

Then the original design is flawed D:

 

[MotorRoach]

*idles*

Shading in some parts is.... eeww, his ears are wrong, his cap is too big, and I don't like the front hair, here is a little fix:

 

[Inazuma]

*idles*

Yet again Senku owns spiriting. All I have to say it wow.

 

[Wombatwarlord777]

That's Bark's original design, his legs are supposed to be short and thin.

While I agree that the legs on your sprite are too thin, the problem is exaggerated by Bark's considerable gut, which is part of his original design.

Other than that, I like Senku's sprite, especially in how the torso is more enlongated than that of Scizor's sprite. Not only is that closer to Bark's official design (which I personally prefer), but it makes him distinct from Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and most other character .wads in SRB2. Variety is nice!

 

[D00D64]

Senku + GTFs edit looks perfect IMHO. Now if only he was on his arms like in the Fighters...Maybe as a Wait pose?

 

[Scizor300]

Bodies are finished

 

[Chrispy]

You need to make the angle of the corner frames more...dramatic. I'm not sure how to explain it. The front corner needs to be facing more towards the front and back should be facing more away.

 

[Scizor300]

Heads for the side and back angles are finished, but they need some work.

 

[Azurah]

Those sprites look pretty good. But, Bark's hair in the side and back sprites look more like Knuckle's dreadlocks. Also, I agree with Chrispy; the corner frame angles need to be turned a little bit. But, keep up the good work, Scizor300!

Edit: looks. Sorry. Not paying attention to my typing.