verifiaman
The master of verification.
This is my newest level: http://www.sendspace.com/file/q8v6kf
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Artic terminal zone (in progress)
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Kopper
Does not use Sonic.
Yeah, because if someone doesn't know better, this could just be a stupid mashup of the ice Match level and the terminal of twistiness.
Sky The Destroyer
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Because I'm so nice...
verifiaman
The master of verification.
Because I'm so nice...
dude how did you get up there?
verifiaman
The master of verification.
So how was it?
Actually, it was pretty raw and unrefined. I kind of like this theme, but what you have now is not enjoyable. Some of the scenery made no sense, and it was pretty confusing where I was supposed to go. And maybe it's just me, but I really don't like the concept of hopping on enemies to cross death pits.
Sky The Destroyer
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Gravity cheat.
verifiaman
The master of verification.
what scenery made no sense
Hmm... The most glaringly bad things are:
1: Hard to tell where to go, or where you even CAN go.
2: The tanks of water that you cant even tell are full of water. I mean, if your gonna do that, you should use complete water blocks, not top and bottom only ones.
3: Random Ice Blocks scattered everywhere. I mean, why are there giant chunks of ice with pipes sticking out of them? The design doesn't even make sense. Plus, the textures on them are transparent, and that looks really horrible with those textures.
Best things about it:
1: The music. Where'd it come from? It was pretty cool, you just need to make it loop correctly, without fading.
2: The theme. It's really a nice idea, the ice factory thing, you just need to pull it off better.
3: The gimmicks in it, like the elevator, and the bridge, made it a lot more interesting.
Overall, I think it's not BAD, but it could use a lot of improvement. Keep up the good work!
1: Hard to tell where to go, or where you even CAN go.
2: The tanks of water that you cant even tell are full of water. I mean, if your gonna do that, you should use complete water blocks, not top and bottom only ones.
3: Random Ice Blocks scattered everywhere. I mean, why are there giant chunks of ice with pipes sticking out of them? The design doesn't even make sense. Plus, the textures on them are transparent, and that looks really horrible with those textures.
Best things about it:
1: The music. Where'd it come from? It was pretty cool, you just need to make it loop correctly, without fading.
2: The theme. It's really a nice idea, the ice factory thing, you just need to pull it off better.
3: The gimmicks in it, like the elevator, and the bridge, made it a lot more interesting.
Overall, I think it's not BAD, but it could use a lot of improvement. Keep up the good work!
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