A SRB2 Forum comic?

[RyanHedge]

Well, I want to make a comic series based off of the avents that happen here. But before I get started I want feed back from everyone about the Idea. So download the .rtf and read it. Than post feedback please.



http://cratervillage.6te.net/stuff/SRB2comics.rtf

Enjoy.

 

[Spazzo]

Reminds me alot of SRB2 Town.

 

[RyanHedge]

Never heard of that one..

 

[Bigboi]

Well, I want to make a comic series based off of the avents that happen here. But before I get started I want feed back from everyone about the Idea. So download the .rtf and read it. Than post feedback please.



http://cratervillage.6te.net/stuff/SRB2comics.rtf

Enjoy.

I "fond" a few spelling errors. That is SO ******* ironic.

 

[RyanHedge]

Yep noticed them too. I'll fix it and resend it. What's so ironic my spelling or thge comic idea?

 

[Spazzo]

Because Sik's mother tounge wasnt english, and he had alot of typing errors too. :P

 

[RyanHedge]

^^ I'm trying, it takes a few times to proof read than there's still problems!

 

[Princess Plushima]

I'm a human dictionary (Sometimes), maybe I can help.

 

[RyanHedge]

The question is do you guys like the comic. The grammar is something that always can be fixed with ease but the plot and spriting is harder...

 

[Shuffle]

Well you gave us a text file, so we can't really answer that, now can we?

 

[RyanHedge]

Oy! This is the best way to make a comic make a sript first than the actul image itself afterwards. Heck if you want to see a comic be me and my friends just type in the address without the ertra stuff and look for TCH at the menu bar... I just need to know if this plot is good....

I'll spell it out for you guys.... Don't hate for this Mystic.....

URL removed. If you knew it was against the rules, why did you do it?

Go there to see a comic that myu frinds and I've done it's in TCH part on the menu....Look what I done man I could get suspended for this...-_-

 

[Callum]

Now why did you get edited there, Ryan?

 

[RyanHedge]

Gee I wonder.... Could it be it's agianst the rules, maybe I don't know...cough "Sarcasme" cough
So if you want to see a comic just post what the plot needs. I know my grammars bad and spelling is to but I have friends that help me with that part..

 

[Princess Plushima]

Well, no offense, but I really don't get it. The plot that is.

 

[RyanHedge]

Go ahead piont out what you're cunfused about and I'll do what I can. Finally some talking about the plot!!!

 

[Princess Plushima]

Frame four just makes no sense to me. I don't really get anything about that last frame.

 

[Megamantn]

Dude, post a Picture URL of the Fan Comic!

 

[RyanHedge]

Frame 4 is after the mallet hits. It sappose to show that the 3 characters are in shock from seeing a 100 tons mallet come out of nowhere and hit a bunch of nOObs... At this piont I pop out of the side of the panel saying I see you found my contols for the satelite of doom witch was what controlled the mallet attack. What is is truobling you?

And I won't realese the comic until I get more feedback from the cummiunty since it's based of it's happenings.

 

[Princess Plushima]

Frame 4 is after the mallet hits. It sappose to show that the 3 characters are in shock from seeing a 100 tons mallet come out of nowhere and hit a bunch of nOObs... At this piont I pop out of the side of the panel saying I see you found my contols for the satelite of doom witch was what controlled the mallet attack. What is is truobling you?

And I won't realese the comic until I get more feedback from the cummiunty since it's based of it's happenings.

Oh, controls for a sattelite of doom. The way it's worded it sounds like sattelite of controls for the game Doom.

 

[RyanHedge]

I'll fix that right of the bat! Pulls up script....

There you go! It should have the wording down a little better.

well since I can't get anymore feedback on the plot... How do you think SSN, Mystic, and Hotdog should look? I was planning a basic Tails make for SSN but this is your chance to help shape their on line look. I would mind hearing from the actual people too. This will be the last bit before I make the comic so hurry or I'll just use what I want.