This is okay as a first level. There's not really alot of that kind of fast paced platforming I like for alot of srb2 levels and instead is very tight and kinda annoying alot of the time, tho i do appreciate that There's some cool lil skips you can do which i think could be intentionally added, and There's actually some pretty cool things to find and some interesting visuals, tho alot of the time There's like a small ass hole that's a delay pit or and I don't really get why it's there, like There's just stuff that's there like this one big ass slope that kinda only works with physic or character mods, or this one area next to that which is in the water and looks cool but to my knowledge it doesn't lead to a special stages kr give you anything like a emerald token, or also next to that before you go down the loop There's just this area that has nothing but a view of the sky and nothing else. Going to visuals it's kind of boring with the overused green flower zone stage textures and there isn't much variety with the floor textures or walls, like maybe there could be flowers in some area that are empty which is also another thing about the stage, but like I said before There's some cool neat stuff like this one section we're it's a bunch of big square holes with fences around them which I thought looked neat, tho since there isn't anything in them and is just a death put for all of them instead of some kind of cool secret area to hang out or maybe arid canyon wind tornados coming out of them. For some final other things Music is literally gfz1, there's some area that feel a Lil tight with how much space there is, there isn't much shields around the stage, and finally I didn't encounter that much bugs or glitches tho I will share some of the ones I did discover along with some examples of soem of the issues I have in the discussion room. Overall I would give this probably a 7 for a first level, and compared to liek other levels ever probably like a 4 out of 10 tho I think you definitely can make something pretty good in the future :3
