GreenCanyon Zone

[DroxSorcerer]

This is the second level I've made, GreenCanyon Zone.

Screenshots:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=F5JG3XJK

 

[SRB2 Guy]

Downloading... Will give you review soon.

Edit: Impressive. I didn't like the random enemy and moniter placement, though. It needs more scenery, and the last part has wonky textures. Also, you might to get blades of grass on the edges, I think you do that by puting a grass texture as the middle texture. I'm gonna PM you my "quick fix version" anyways now.

-SRB2 Guy

 

[Avi]

This level is too quick...

And there isn't really much detail put into this, judging by the scenery.

 

[Jazz]

PIT flats needed for the deathpits.

Water needs blue colormaps.

Grass sectors need sector borders.

You may also want to check the SRB2 wiki for level design tips:
http://srb2wiki.sepwich.com/wiki/Level_Designing_101

 

[Kaysakado]

DLing, review later... (Stupid Megaspace's 'wait 40 seconds')

 

[dark dragon]

it would be nice if i can see the map in the screenshot cause i dont download unless it looks good. And is this a co op level or just made for matchs?????

 

[DroxSorcerer]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm going to fix those problems and possibly make it longer when I release an Act 2 I'm making. And Dark Dragon, it was actually meant to be a Single Player level, and I had Sonic in mind when making it. That's why Tails and Knuckles can beat it very fast.

 

[on Edge]

alias screenie "viewsize 12; wait 3; screenshot; wait 3; viewsize 11;"
bind 0 screenie

 

[Shadow Hog]

At the very least, stop pulling down the console to show off your screenshot; that blocks off half the level from sight.

 

[on Edge]

Or better yet!

con_height

 

[Vash]

This:

alias screenie "viewsize 12; wait 3; screenshot; wait 3; viewsize 11;"
bind 0 screenie

is better than this:

con_height

because you don't have to worry about the console being in the way at all.

 

[on Edge]

But the second one will work as well, and requires less skill to use.