Park Raceway

Guitarplaya

Member

• Dec 29, 2007

• #1

This is a very small racetrack (10 second laps) that I made with the THZ1 texture set. Quite basic and my first circuit wad. Criticism please!

Screenie:

This was taken with a forced mode, it's not actually tag.

Download:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/odw1hv
Mirror:
http://www.supersanctuary.net/srpgp/ffh/download.php?file=8fcba1e0a34c2cf3255bf223798b0d60

Have fun playing/criticising!

 

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ChakraX

Member

• Dec 29, 2007

• #2

lol

heh heh! lol

 

Guitarplaya

Member

• Dec 29, 2007

• #3

Well? Criticism? After 21 views?

 

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knucky

Member

• Dec 29, 2007

• #4

10sec huh? after 10 turn,i have done 4 lap in 14sec lol,when you act corectly its way so easy and short.But still a good~~short~~ map

oh and some ring are too high,you must jump to get them <----bad

 

fickleheart

ms reflec beat stan

• Dec 29, 2007

• #5

The level really didn't have much in it. It's not bad layout-wise, but I wasn't fond of the thing placement. You had rings running into dead ends. Although it wasn't exciting, it isn't a particularly bad track. 7/10

Woulda been first if not for the error with a session or whatever it is.

 

Joeyl10

:3

• Dec 29, 2007

• #6

Good, though not the best. Spread out the springs at the beginning a bit, Change the song to a more GHZ-ish like song, Delete some of the rings and it would be okay.

 

Sik

Member

• Dec 29, 2007

• #7

*downloading*

OK, I'm gonna play it later, but if it's like you say, then I guess this is one of those maps that should be played with a huge amount of laps (20 or maybe even more) to see merely who's the faster.

This gave me an idea, make a "straight" map (I mean without too jumping and such, more running) where you have to race to the end like crazy, sorta kind of Sonic OutRun. >_> OK, it's a bad idea... *sigh*