Race levels by DeltaPhoenix

Hi.
i'm making some race levels. I think i need to work on the design, but here are some screenshots:





You'll need to chose the way in the second level (2nd screenshot)

Now, did i forget anything?
Yes, the download link:
http://files.filefront.com/DeltaRacewad/;11213890;/fileinfo.html

Before i download this the screenshots make it look really cramped

Looks waaaay too cramped. Make the pathes much bigger. The pictures make it clostraphobic (however it's spelt) in the cave-like area.

You're Right...

Yeah, i thought i would need to work on the design...
The first levels name is "Do not move" Because moving will make the level fail... maybe that's kinda stupid... You will start above a spring that will send you to another and so on until end. 2nd lvl is not very tricky... None of the 3 springs is the right one... you will die at the end of them all. The true path is behind you... But yes, you're right... i need to work on my design. Btw, this was my first try at a LVL wad...

Do Not Move, 0/10

Just like the title. You sit there, and the level will finish for you.

Tricky One, 0/10

Don't use Adventure Mode, Race doesn't need robots, no Thok Barrier, basically everything that makes a bad map. Also, you have to go backwards at the start.

Overall, 0/10

Scrap and remake. Use real MusicSlots. And when you say that they're Race maps, set them to Race mode.