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Sonic and the Broken World

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I didint like much how short TCZ1 was so while working on CC2 im now expanding the level a bit, have some spoilers
 

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i added a cutscene in CCZ3, after defeating metal faker sonic arrives at the core of the computer where he gets dragged in, entering UCZ1
 

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CCZ2 is now 2/5 done and while working on it i also continued FCZ2 and maybe completed it, enjoy the spilers
 

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You should try and add more variation to the architecture in CCZ. Running through loads of square rooms with exclusively 90 degree turns gets very monotonous after a while. Explore making something that clearly is artificial, while still being varied on the X and Y axis. It's too easy to fall into "boxy room" level progression, and changing things up will definitely be more refreshing to the player.
 
You should try and add more variation to the architecture in CCZ. Running through loads of square rooms with exclusively 90 degree turns gets very monotonous after a while. Explore making something that clearly is artificial, while still being varied on the X and Y axis. It's too easy to fall into "boxy room" level progression, and changing things up will definitely be more refreshing to the player.

thanks for the idea! i will try to variate more the next rooms in CCZ2
 
continuing the development of CCZ2, enjoy these spoilers
 

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This is looking great, you're doing a good job! Keep the good work. :)

thanks!



here is a new spoiler for CCZ2 while im reworking the boss in LFZ
 

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Here are some spoilers of the outside of the second major area
 

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CCZ2 layout is almost complete, i wanted to make the level longer but i reached the limit before it starts breaking
 

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after i finish CCZ2 i will do TCZ2, for now enjoy these spoilers
 

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I’m confused. Did the computer merge itself with the world or did the computer mess up big time?
Many of the zone names mention crashing and stuff like that and that’s why I’m confused.
 
I’m confused. Did the computer merge itself with the world or did the computer mess up big time?
Many of the zone names mention crashing and stuff like that and that’s why I’m confused.

the computer is slowly corrupting the world with the chaos emeralds converting it into broken and emtpy wastes, the first 2 zones (brokenflower and techno crashing) have this name to signify this corruption more
 
the computer is slowly corrupting the world with the chaos emeralds converting it into broken and emtpy wastes, the first 2 zones (brokenflower and techno crashing) have this name to signify this corruption more

We still don't understand. Either you should change the names of the levels or put something like placeholders.
 
We still don't understand. Either you should change the names of the levels or put something like placeholders.

Sorry, but I cant change the levels name anymore since im now too used to them (and becouse i cant find any better names), could you tell me what specific part of the story you dont unerstand so i could try to explain it better?
 
Sorry, but I cant change the levels name anymore since im now too used to them (and becouse i cant find any better names), could you tell me what specific part of the story you dont unerstand so i could try to explain it better?

*ahem*

but the computer is too strong and has a mind of his own, he turns eggman into stone
This.

HOW IS A COMPUTER ABLE to turn Eggman into pure stone? Did it, like, infect him or something?

Explain. Yourself.
 
*ahem*


This.

HOW IS A COMPUTER ABLE to turn Eggman into pure stone? Did it, like, infect him or something?

Explain. Yourself.


the computer was specifically made to be used with the chaos emeralds and with them it is able to do basically almost anything, it corrupts eggman and turns him into a statue just for fun as it could have easily erased him instead
 
I still havent completed CCZ2 but decided to start TCZ2 nontheless, enjoy these spoilers
 

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CCZ2 layout is complete

i managed to finish CCZ2 layout and tested it, ill now continue working on TCZ2 and later probably modify old levels
 

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The only problem I see with that section is that if you mess up, you'll either die a slow, painful death or you'll get sent back to the beginning of it.
 
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