What am I doing wrong?

[Sonow Hakura]

Ok, as you have seen in my sig I have been working on a Halo 2 map pack. But I have been working on one level for a while and I have tried to make it as best as I could using the criticism that I have seen in many other topics. Here is what my map looks like, for some reason it looks horrible because of textures I think......

EDIT:http://www.sendspace.com/file/c33dl9

 

[BlueZero4]

DId you upload the right one? The one you have up has the header as "NDS Lite Zone", and an error message on level loadup. Looking at the level in DB revealed absolutely nothing within you lever. Also, spaces instantly cause your filename to phail.

 

[Sonow Hakura]

Oops, I did upload the wrong one.... I'll fix that.

 

[BlueZero4]

A'right, this makes me cringe.

First, unclosed sectors. Second, ring placement. Also, no thok barrier.

I've fixed 1 and 3, though you're going to have to work on 2 yourself.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/vomh4k

Also, insert rant about how porting levels to SRB2 utterly sux.

 

[Sonow Hakura]

Well that solves that problem. Thanks alot. Now I shall fix the ring placement and maybe make the level a little better. Thanks for the advice/criticism too.