The playground is out (playground.wad)
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Mikesword221
The man with no plan.
I can already see that the fountain needs to be raised and have blocks around it unless its lake then lower it. though I'm going to go ahead and download to see.
EDIT: Oh the fountain does have a source. Well that fixes that. And the map is alright. I give it a 3/5. You lost a point since it was small.
EDIT: Oh the fountain does have a source. Well that fixes that. And the map is alright. I give it a 3/5. You lost a point since it was small.
Super Trace568
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Looks great. I'll try it out.
Karuno
Member
This map has a good idea, but has some bad points:
+Yay, a park.
+I like the toboggan.
+Some detail
-Waaay too cramped. Try multiplying the Thok Barrier's size by 2.
-I hate the song for this level. GFZ2's song fits it more.
-The stairs can be hard to climb. Try adding more, and making them wider.
-I can see this being used for hangout.
-It makes you feel claustrophobic. There's no space for climbing anything, and the features get in the way of the match.
Overall, I'd give this a 2/10. I don't see this fitting more than a small match. The Rings mainly come from Monitors, which can disappear very fast.
Also, why does it say this was made by Konda? Didn't you make it, or did you work together?
+Yay, a park.
+I like the toboggan.
+Some detail
-Waaay too cramped. Try multiplying the Thok Barrier's size by 2.
-I hate the song for this level. GFZ2's song fits it more.
-The stairs can be hard to climb. Try adding more, and making them wider.
-I can see this being used for hangout.
-It makes you feel claustrophobic. There's no space for climbing anything, and the features get in the way of the match.
Overall, I'd give this a 2/10. I don't see this fitting more than a small match. The Rings mainly come from Monitors, which can disappear very fast.
Also, why does it say this was made by Konda? Didn't you make it, or did you work together?
Superusuario
...Wait. I'm here?
She made it but in netgames his/her name is Konda.
How's the music that bad?It' fine for this level.
Good:
+Toboggans,Yay!
+The little FOF's that are crushers are good.
+You can hide in a wall,Thats funny for Hide And Seek.
+Music...Awesome!
Bad:
-The toboggan doesn't have "Control Sector Position Hit"
-Too small
-The wall with the breackable texture isn't breackable,You can walk on it.
-In the stairs that force you out...You'll have to wait and you can get hit.
-You should have another special ring(Excluding infinity.Keep it there.)Like...Auto.
Overall:2/10
You should mke it bigger.Put more things on it.
How's the music that bad?It' fine for this level.
Good:
+Toboggans,Yay!
+The little FOF's that are crushers are good.
+You can hide in a wall,Thats funny for Hide And Seek.
+Music...Awesome!
Bad:
-The toboggan doesn't have "Control Sector Position Hit"
-Too small
-The wall with the breackable texture isn't breackable,You can walk on it.
-In the stairs that force you out...You'll have to wait and you can get hit.
-You should have another special ring(Excluding infinity.Keep it there.)Like...Auto.
Overall:2/10
You should mke it bigger.Put more things on it.
Sasa
Member
I have the auto ring hidden in those small scennery trees!
And the stairs that spins you out gives you invincibility for the movent they force you to do, so noone can hit you while you're doing it.
Oh and it says by konda because I am in netgames named as konda since I enter the whole game, and I coulden't cahnge it allways because it's boring, and people know me as Konda for a long time. And if I wrote Sasa they would be wondering who is Sasa?
And the stairs that spins you out gives you invincibility for the movent they force you to do, so noone can hit you while you're doing it.
Oh and it says by konda because I am in netgames named as konda since I enter the whole game, and I coulden't cahnge it allways because it's boring, and people know me as Konda for a long time. And if I wrote Sasa they would be wondering who is Sasa?
Mikesword221
The man with no plan.
You need Winrar which you can get here. http://winrar.d0wnloadz.net/
Vash
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That requres registration. Try http://www.rarlab.com/download.htm instead.
EDIT: Not payment, registration. D:
EDIT: Not payment, registration. D:
Karuno
Member
>The hiding spot is a bit obvious to find. Maybe it should be relocated into the room with the falling objects?
>The falling objects move a bit too fast, and way too common. I suggest toning them down a bit. It's pretty hard to get the Monitor in there.
>Try adding some more detail. The level seems pretty bland, and the flowers seem to be placed at random locations. Perhaps a waterfall, a hollow tree, and some fencing? (you'll need to enlarge the area quite a bit to fit these in)
>A tunnel system with slides. At the very top, a Weapon Ring or powerful Monitor can be placed there. The slides can be added in the same way that the tobaggons were.
>The falling objects move a bit too fast, and way too common. I suggest toning them down a bit. It's pretty hard to get the Monitor in there.
>Try adding some more detail. The level seems pretty bland, and the flowers seem to be placed at random locations. Perhaps a waterfall, a hollow tree, and some fencing? (you'll need to enlarge the area quite a bit to fit these in)
>A tunnel system with slides. At the very top, a Weapon Ring or powerful Monitor can be placed there. The slides can be added in the same way that the tobaggons were.
MoonDeLaAxel
FM Synthesized
I like this wad. LOL'd at the deep sandbox. Good hiding spot.
Could be a little more playground like though. Try makeing it look real. Realistic Bars, Realistic grass, Realistic Slide, And try to Make the fountian more like this:
Better, eh?
Could be a little more playground like though. Try makeing it look real. Realistic Bars, Realistic grass, Realistic Slide, And try to Make the fountian more like this:
Better, eh?
Sasa
Member
Why do I need slime texture for the floor? The one around the water one.
By the way I am planing to add a different climbing irons, add waterfalls, add tunnels, and some bouncy room, but under it can be the hiding place.
After all, the grass was supposed to be wet, not turned into water d'oh.
By the way I am planing to add a different climbing irons, add waterfalls, add tunnels, and some bouncy room, but under it can be the hiding place.
After all, the grass was supposed to be wet, not turned into water d'oh.
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