Jellybones
Lawful Neutral
Okay. First of all, stop abusing commas. It makes me want to stop reading, and it's annoying.
Second, you have soom pretty good level ideas, but you should work on them seperatly and not make it a pack. Thirdly, the time limit on yourself. I understand what you mean by taking too long- but it's not a good idea. Take your time with levels, it will make them good and actually enjoyable.
Lastly. Listen to people. I understand this level is in progress, but from what I see whenever someone points something out in your that may not be a good idea, you have some kind of excuse for it. Maybe you should consider what they say and actually try it?
Second, you have soom pretty good level ideas, but you should work on them seperatly and not make it a pack. Thirdly, the time limit on yourself. I understand what you mean by taking too long- but it's not a good idea. Take your time with levels, it will make them good and actually enjoyable.
Lastly. Listen to people. I understand this level is in progress, but from what I see whenever someone points something out in your that may not be a good idea, you have some kind of excuse for it. Maybe you should consider what they say and actually try it?