My First Level ever

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Hello, Here is my first level: http://www.sendspace.com/file/fihi1h

I just messed around in Doom Builder and tried to make a House sort of map, You can criticise it and I'll keep improving on it.
The map is Match by the way.

Here are some screenshots: ( These are taken in 3D mode by the way )

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Looking down at the player 1 start

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One of the Decorations

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Map from top

It features: Homing and Rail Ring ( Adding more )
A random box you have to climb stairs and platform jump to get
Some Random Decorations

Going to come:
Elevators up to the top of Monkeyvision thingy
More Rail Rings
A secret area

Enjoy and make sure to comment!

( Inform me of any bad glitches )
 
How'd you get things to show up in 3D mode? anyways, testing now.

EDIT: In terms of layout, it's OK. Better then most first maps, at least. Anyway, a few things:
  • Make the underwater red spring a yellow one. You should still go high enough to get to the high-up areas.
  • Add weapon rings. NOWZ! A few good places would be:
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  • The top of those "stairs"
  • The top of the monkey picture.
  • The top of the really high grey pillars.
[*]Colormaps kthxbai.
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I think there were more, but I can't remember them.
 
seems fun. I'll go download it right now.

EDIT: The first thing I suggest is to rename it Abandoned_House.wad since you can't upload wads with spaces. I also agree with Kaysakado about the springs. Red springs are just not necessary for the pools. It also seems rather small, but other than that, it is pretty good.
 
Kaysakado said:
How'd you get things to show up in 3D mode? anyways, testing now.

EDIT: In terms of layout, it's OK. Better then most first maps, at least. Anyway, a few things:
  • Make the underwater red spring a yellow one. You should still go high enough to get to the high-up areas.
  • Add weapon rings. NOWZ! A few good places would be:
    [list:f96b776518]
  • The top of those "stairs"
  • The top of the monkey picture.
  • The top of the really high grey pillars.
[*]Colormaps kthxbai.
[/list:u:f96b776518]
I think there were more, but I can't remember them.
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There is a Weapon ring on the top of the monkey picture, Anyway

I shall do some of that then

I did have colour maps but they broke.
 
Meh. You've definately gotten a handle onquite a bit of the technical stuff, but why don't you try to do something real now?
 
Just 1 thing I don't like. If its a house, why is the walls made out of rocks?
Shouldnt they at least be wood? No offense, but the rock there fails.
 
It looks like a good Zim's Base mimic, especially for a first. Maybe add some detail here and there (ie: to expand the size of the map for a larger play area but not necessarily a larger room) and it looks like it would be a very interesting match. I'll look into it tomorrow though. *yawn*

I think it looks good now, and it looks 'real' enough to me at least...
 
Okay, It's now updated.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ixy69t

It features:
Wallpaper
2 New weapon rings
A pit that is behind a block of Wood

Next:
Adding a texture on the Wood block that says 'Danger: Dangerous Hole ahead'

The whole point of the hole is a junkyard sort of thing

Enjoy.
 
Supervirus. Before somebody else gets here and flames you, you need to PM Sprout. Teh ebil admins will possibly tell you this in a less easygoing manner. I'll tell him for you anyway.

Have a great day, Hannah
 
Nice unique avatar...

Gosh darn it, uploading to sendspace = noobs bumping the topic
 
Not so supervirus said:
Could you uplaod it to Sendspace again plaese?
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Mystic said:
14. Do not post in a topic asking for a file to be reuploaded. Doing so will lead to a quick ban. Try searching the forums for it, or possibly private messaging the author to see if the author is interested in fixing his link.
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