Alrighty....
1)It probabally isn't a good idea to put the deathmatch starts right next to each other....
2)Place the diagonal rings for the springs on the springs, they don't line up this way.
3)I don't like the random gas jets and the red spring. The jets were giving me some lag in single player.
4)This map is kinda small. Add a few more areas, don't just resize the map, though.
5)Put in some weapon rings.
6)The lava shouldn't be a death pit, instead, make it fire damage, and add a spring to get out of it.
7)the pillars with nothing on them should have an item on them. Take the item boxes from behind the house, and put them on the pillars. 30 rings in one place isn't good...
8)Add a map header. The music doesn't fit, and the map isn't sapphire falls. I still don't get why people don't make these...>.>
that's about it. Not bad. 6/10
